For You.

I wrote this on our 'two months' for English.

Don't go, don't leave me now,

Like the way the mist covers the clouds.

You're everything I've ever wanted to be,

Less to yourself, but more to me.

Your blue eyes take me back in time,

To when the lightning struck to the beat of hearts;

Pounding impulses like falling thunder.

As the rain cried for you,

The breaking of leaves tried to catch you.

When the wind stopped blowing,

The world stopped breathing,

When you said "goodbye" like the beginning of a solstice night,

Right there you proved that we're just a living memory.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful and romantic :) I loved this was really emotional and I could feel the love oozing out of this piece.
It was very deep and so from the heart, I loved it :)
Great job!

[annabellee]

Simply beautiful!
I loved the imagery.
thanks for sharing :)

[Lyn Anderson]

What a heartfelt and beautiful verse. Thank you for sharing.

[Miss Kerri]

I'm glad you liked it, thank you! :)