Haiku #1

Haiku #1

A Poem by Keress Ambrose Frey Weidner

Desperate alarm

I shiver across places

Unseen and unsung.

© 2016 Keress Ambrose Frey Weidner


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Mysterious! The first line builds intensity, the second gives a feeling and the last builds mystery of something that is unseen and untold... Perfect! 5-7-5 pattern...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 27, 2016
Last Updated on September 27, 2016
Tags: unseen, unsung, invisible, haiku, verse, poetry, syllable, alarm

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Keress Ambrose Frey Weidner
Keress Ambrose Frey Weidner

Kettering, OH



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