Heart's Shield

It's in your heart, you're falling apart.
Those tears you cry might imply,
Sadness is deep, making you weep.
So we look to the stars to heal all scars.
Shine down that love on the wings of a dove.

Wake me up inside, don't wont to hide.
Send me a kiss, acelerating the bliss.
Hold me tight and take away the fight.
Reach for me, please don't flee.
Light my way and make grace stay.

My soul cries out and you're in route.
Spirit of fire, filled with desire.
Open the gates, revealing what fates?
Everlasting knight are you doing what's right?
Stabbed in the heart, so began the art.

To test is wrong, the influence of your song.
Open the right path, don't want to feel your wrath.
A life to live, pick it up and give.
Open up and feel, it's kind of a big deal.
Forget the loss, forgiveness came on a cross.

Reviews

[lissalovesyou]

Great job! Everything is so beautifully expressed. One little mistake "Reach for me, please don't flea." change to flee
Overall, I could sense the feeling in this poem. It's so passionate. And the best part is that it doesn't only apply to the typical sexual relationship between a male and a female. It's so much more. It includes so much more as well.
lissalovesyou:)

[Jess K]

Thank you.