This Girl or That Girl

This Girl or That Girl

A Poem by Joshua Kepfer

This girl, or that girl

These eyes, or those eyes

That hair or this hair

These blonde locks or dark streams

Those shoes or these shoes

does it

matter at all

This nose, that nose

Those lips, her cheeks

High hips, long legs

what does define

our beauty

This skirt, those jeans

That too short, this too long

why do we

even care

© 2016 Joshua Kepfer


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Josh...
I agree with ReedWrite..very whimsical..
The statement at the end..why do we really care..
Says it all..
It's kind of a reflection on the current trend in society..
I really liked it..
Keep Writing!
Debbie

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua Kepfer

8 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm sort of new at poetry.
Why do we care, indeed.
It's not the exterior that makes the ultimate difference, or impression...but what lies within. Love the whimsy of this poem...the flow of it. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Joshua Kepfer

8 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on November 19, 2016
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Joshua Kepfer
Joshua Kepfer

Auburn, CA



About
I am a student at Sierra College, CA. I am 20 years old. Favorite writers: J.R.R. Tolkien, Ted Dekker. more..

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B.S. B.S.

A Poem by Joshua Kepfer



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