her world

mystery of her way

her world is a bit on the wild side

she leaves me gifts and footprints then,

she hides......

and watches me from within her world,

i can feel her as she moves,

she must be waiting for the perfect moment....

to introduce her ways.....

i hope she stays,

but into another world she does slip......

take me with you i do plead...

her soul is so much more than i can perceive....

tiny and soft,

she walks in the dark.....

whispers in my ear and vanishes before i awake.....

its as though she has seen all of this before....

maybe just a second ahead of me,

thats all she needs....

fun and games?

no its the way of the queen....

this land is special,

its still alive,

evolving with every breath,

she knows who i am,

she wishes a comand,

i fall,

deep into a blissful world that garden the lives of the wise,

and the new,

the babies paradise...

like the garden in wich we all return....

 

eventually.....

 

but i so miss her when she goes,

to the place that only she knows....

free spirit,

dragon,

yes, i know,

crazy sounds, but since she flies...what can i say is crazy? me, no...

you....only you know......

she ......is indescribable...enuf already.....k

Reviews

[Shelby]

I love that this doesn't rhyme consistently. Creates an interesting and lyrical flow. This was sweet and the ending was funny. It fits the "free spirit" that I imagine as the speaker. Very cool.