Finished...?

God tells me yes

my heart tells me no

it feels so wrong

but its so right.

This is so hard.

I'm so sorry

if it hurts you

but it hurts me more.

This is what I need.

It is.

That's doesn't mean

it's not going to hurt.

You're still there though,

right?

I can't hear you anymore.

Those calls of love

I deprive myself of

but I know it's what I need most.

If you think for a second,

I'm going to forget

Those adorable moments with you

You're wrong.

There's no way in hell

I'm letting you go.

Because I know a good thing

when I see it.

We will never be

never ever be

finished.

Author's Note

Criticism is welcome.

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

Third piece of yours I can relate to! Excellent work! I know the feeling of losing something, but not being able to let it go. It hurts, doesn't it?

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Very much. Thank you for the outstanding reviews, I really appreciate it!:)

[Admiral Kirk]

No problem! I'm obsessed with getting reviews too, so I give them because I know how much people appreciate them... :D Great poems, worthy of great reviews.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

:D

[Mackenzie Brooke]

i like it alot i can definatley relate to it good job :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks :)

[Olivia Marie]

I loved the ending. Beautifully written :) I also loved how you ended the poem with the one word "finished" and also how you repeated the word "never" in the two lines before the end. It added great emphasis. :) Lovely and beautiful :D

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you so much!

[Olivia Marie]

Any time :)

[Serenity Faith]

An interesting way to describe not being able to let go. Your ending was very strong and still echoes in my mind. I did catch one small grammatical error though, 'that's doesn't mean'~that doesn't mean? Other than that, a very good piece, keep it up.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it :)

[Pax]

nice, i enjoyed its simplicity and honest truth about relationship problems. keep it up

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks for this. I really appreciate it.

[Tai Ryens]

It flows well, but I think it could be improved by expanding the vocabulary used here. Other than that, you've done a fine job with expressing yourself.