I'm in Love

A poem

I wish you were here

you're so far yet so close

I miss you so much

You know that I love you most

 

If anyone hurts you,

verbal pushes and shoves

you better believe

I'm not afraid to put up the gloves

 

Knowing you're there

and that you love me so much

a tear comes to my eye

it's my heart that you touch

 

These emotions, confusing.

These tears, so rare.

These screams, the truth.

Everyone else? Unaware.

 

Sometimes I become doubtful,

moments when my fears creep

you reassure me.

My faith, I will always keep.

 

When it seems that no one is there,

that every one hates me to death,

he turns me around and says

I'll love everything you do, every breath.

 

So what I'm trying to say,

though it's not hard to do,

is tell you what I believe.

Say I LOVE YOU <3

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I like the fourth stanza the best.
"These emotions, confusing" - I think that this line perfectly explains the complexity of love.
I like your poem. It deals with the common theme of love, but yours is kinda different than all those other poems. Good job.

[deepblue04]

This is amazing! Most topics of falling in love tends to get annoying, but this shows what love is about. Keep it up and Rock On!

[Mr.Cardigan]

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[Mr.Cardigan]

i agree with sugar and spice, its a great poem, love it

[Sugar and Spice]

This is amazing! You've captured the essence of love so so well!... Probably my favourite poem that I've read all year! :) Keep it up! ~Sugar and Spice xx