Two Different People

I'm talking to you.

I don't know what to say anymore.

it hurts me down to the core.

Come fill this empty space.

 

I love you too pieces, it's true.

But how am I to believe you?

You're just so far away.

 

At this poitn, you're tired of my crap.

But something won't let me believe you love me back.

 

Maybe it's that voice inside my head.

Refusing healing,

silently screaming

making me wish I was dead.

 

And how am I to trust you?

Two different people, you relay.

One says they love me, true?

One doesn't know what to say.

 

On a small screen your letters tell me

you care for and love me to death.

But face to face or mouth to ear,

I'll tell ya, don't hold your breath.

 

So at the end of the day,

can you honestly say,

say those three words too me?

 

Was it all just a game,

or am I to blame?

One person, I need you to be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I wrote this fairly quickly. It's kind of been on my mind for a while, but I've kind of denied it to be a thought until now. I guess I've been blind with love, if that makes sense. Please hold back on negative comments and rewriting my work, this means a lot to me. I hope the person I wrote this to knows who he is.

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

You explain the two sides of a person you may see when someone else is acting strangely. It may have been written quickly, but it still entertains me nonetheless. Towards the end, your sorrow is great; I could tell through your choice in words. Well done.

[AK]

Really sad but great poem nonetheless. It might be written quickly, but I still think it is really very good. Keep writing!

[xSamilynnx]

awww its sad but amazing :(.... dude if you need help im here for you.... im not sure how much i can help haha but ill try :)..... i wanna know who this other guy is too btw

[Whiskurz]

A beautifully written piece.....Tender and soul bearing.....Great write.....Whisk

[Priscilla Sayers]

Sometimes we must get the emotions that threaten to drown us out. Just scream it, write it, but for goodness sake, always release it! nicely done! I can say i have been there before, and i find myself there often.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I'm sorry this is happening to you, but perhaps the guy is just a bit confused? Love is a weird thing, especially if expressing emotions hasn't been his strong side throughout his whole life. Besides, can a teenager really feel the true love? Or are those just some form of strengthened emotions, unable to manifestate themselves into something bigger until we grow up? Damn, I'm engaging myself into questions I cannot answer and questions that maybe don't make any sense to you XD
Anyways, I suggest you openly tell him how you feel and ask him what's wrong with him. Communication is the key.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime good to listen to your own thoughts. Some people are downers. Best to escape from them and re-set your life and thoughts. I believe. "If it don't feel right. Escape". I like the thoughts and the questions in this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[BMColey]

On a small screen your letters tell me
you care for and love me to death.
But face to face or mouth to ear,
I'll tell ya, don't hold your breath. my favorite part. deep piece i enjoyed it. keep doin your thing and dont let nobody bring you down

[Mr.Cardigan]

i hope the guy realizes that your the best thing that has happened to him, that he should try to call you everyday and see how your day went and to say i love you, and if he doesnt then hes the most stupid person ever...