Loving Confusion

Just popped into my head. This is how I'm feeling right now...yup!

I just don"t know what to say next!

Whenever we talk, though,

some how you know what's best.

 

Do you mean what you say?

Of course you do.

Just not in the way

I wish you would.

 

It's so hard to interpret.

Since the first day we first met,

you were a hit.

 

I was just so shy.

I don't know why,

I just needed a shove,

I think I'm in love.

 

But I just can't say it.

It's hard to admit to.

But my candle's lit.

It's true that I'll miss you.

 

Author's Note

This is dedicated to my friend Dustin

Reviews

[Mr.Cardigan]

love it

[BLBrown]

Congrats on 2nd place. Nice job.

[xSamilynnx]

awww i know who your talking bout... its very good... well written n nice vocab... good job little sis :)

[Simmirose]

great job! nice rhyme schem, a wonderful read... i'm pretty sure everyone can relate to this feeling at some point or another

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

Kenzie, These are not only innocent words, You’ve threaded Pearls – It’s too early to be in the love but, this is truth behind real and unobstructed feelings. Take Care - Keep Writing for us.

[Coyote Poetry]

Positive words and desires in this poem. Hard to put your feelings out. Can open the door for disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[just is]

I really enjoyed this write, poetic and well written.
Very nicely done!

[rivers]

I timidly confess: Young love can be an ugly business...Sometimes it hurts so good and others it just hurts...never tell until you're ready for the truth... However the truth shall set you free.... Confusion? Get used to to it. It's the lessor of inquiring moments journeys...keep on keeping on, all the answers are within you.