I don't belong

It seems like everywhere I go, everything I do, it's always the same issue popping up. This be it.

I don't belong.

I don't belong where I am,

 with the people I hang out with

They're all happy.

There souls alined

in a sacred web

that all lovers carry.

My web. Burnt. Buried.

It doesn't belong.

I don't belong.

 

My friends, I don't belong.

You all seemd to click.

You fit together like a deck of cards.

I'm just the joker.

No one really needs me.

No one even knows why I'm there.

Jokers don't belong.

I don't belong.

 

My friends. My web.

They don't belong. I don't belong.

If anyone cares, that's why I'm gone.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Well at least I broke through the writer's block. Let me know how it is!

Reviews

[Aubrai]

Seems to me that you belong here. Write. Write. Write. And you belong.

[afra]

very deep ...some times i feel the same way

[A. V. Madison]

An amazing read, very powerful :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts in the poem. Hard to find the place you want to be. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[closed..acct]

Wow such depth and powerful emotion in this.
You are a wonderful poet. I enjoyed this piece.

[luna11]

Lovely poem
No matter what you think, there's always a place where you do belong, whether it's with the people you want to belong with or not.
xx

XD

[AK]

Very nice poem! I loved your description of the sacred web and how yours is burnt. It is a very creative way to express your feelings. So is comparing yourself to a joker in a deck of cards. Very creative. The last line ended this beautiful poem really well. Great, great poem!

[Dove]

There have been times where I have felt the same way you did when you wrote this poem and I guarantee there will be more times when i feel this way. But deep down inside I will always know that no matter how miserable and depressed I feel then I know I belong where I am. This is a great poem and I enjoy reading it.

[Wolfwind]

I can feel this piece. My youth was filled with many situations that made me think similar things and sometimes... I had to walk to find my own path and for certain, my own identity that I could call my own.
The flow of the poem was wonderful and read smoothly from top to bottom. Very well done!

Aaron