Simply Be

A random poem I wrote in school. I'm not quite sure what it means yet. Sometimes, for me, writing is kind of like dreaming. First you have the dream, then you try to figure it out after.

Author's Note

Waiting is hard to do when you can't sit still
Making a childish heart wait for the next thrill
Maybe I can fill that space
Maybe I can write that page
Maybe I can leave this place
Maybe- if not for the hinder in age.

Loving people for the sake of love is the hardest thing to do
While the world sees in bright yellows, all I see is deep blue.
But while gazing through the night's eyes
They led me to a somewhat astounding surprise.
Other night people, some the same as me.
But sadly, there is no place where I may simply be.

Reviews

[Saumya]

A beautiful step, towards lovely phases of life......!!!! with a literal truth in the last line
feels like the one voice from different souls...!!!
very well done..!!! :)
with best wishes,
saumya

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

it's a morning wake up call for me > Loving people for the sake... an amazing lyrical thought.

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

it's a morning wake up call for me > Loving people for the sake... an amazing lyrical thought.

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

it's a morning wake up call for me > Loving people for the sake... an amazing lyrical thought.

[Invisible]

it all leads up to the last line, that's what really sells it for me

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

I love it.
Beautiful imagery, relatable subject.
Great write!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks!

[Mir]

This was extremley well written, and I enjoyed reading it a lot! :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks a lot!

[SmileBig :)]

I really think this is a great poem :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you so much!

[SmileBig :)]

Sure, no problem :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

:)

[MrOldFashioned]

a simple sweet melody as i find it m'lady.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Well thank you, kind sir :)

[MrOldFashioned]

you are quite welcome my dear.

[hogan]

Puts across the inner feelings of someone who does not, or can not conform to the artificially structured constraints we find our selves placed in. I like it a lot.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks for the review :)