Some Times

Um...poetry?

Author's Note

Sometimes the pain makes me want to fall
Sometimes I don't know what's the right call
Sometimes your voice sticks in my ears
Sometimes he's more then what appears

Sometimes I can tell you
Sometimes my heart runs away
Sometimes I'm a child too
Sometimes, could you come out to play?

Sometimes my thoughts float way out afar
Sometimes my heart reaches out to shooting stars
Sometimes I wish you'd love me back
Sometimes my love gets way off track

Sometimes I try to make sense of this madness
Sometimes I let wander just to watch where it goes
Sometimes I try to hard to block out the sadness
Sometimes it's the thing you can't see that really shows

Sometimes my mind moves slower then my legs to the door
Sometimes the shit hits the fan before my body hits the floor

Reviews

[Amanda]

Second to last stanza is the best and what I relate to the most. Great job :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks a lot :)