Sometimes the pain makes me want to fall
Sometimes I don't know what's the right call
Sometimes your voice sticks in my ears
Sometimes he's more then what appears
Sometimes I can tell you
Sometimes my heart runs away
Sometimes I'm a child too
Sometimes, could you come out to play?
Sometimes my thoughts float way out afar
Sometimes my heart reaches out to shooting stars
Sometimes I wish you'd love me back
Sometimes my love gets way off track
Sometimes I try to make sense of this madness
Sometimes I let wander just to watch where it goes
Sometimes I try to hard to block out the sadness
Sometimes it's the thing you can't see that really shows
Sometimes my mind moves slower then my legs to the door
Sometimes the shit hits the fan before my body hits the floor
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Last line was epic, it stuck out to me. I could see this being a type of song, it has a certain beat to it, you know? I like it, your repetition is right on target as well.
Sometimes I read a poem and it motivates me to try to write poetry. and anyone who knows me knows I am a novelist not a poet. Lol this was one of those times. Great job!
Sometimes I'm insanely jealous of your writing skills. :D
No, seriously, this is a great poem! It had a song-like feel to it that I really loved, and the emotions were captured really well.
My name's Makenzie and I'm extremely insane. If I were a super hero my super hero name would either be Captain Procrastination or Sarcastimaster. P.S. also by the way, I'm a confessed crazy cat lady. .. more..