Song Choruses

A few different choruses to songs I thought of but never finished. Tell me which one you like best and maybe I'll write a song on it :D

Author's Note

1#:Why Can't You Be Here?
Why...can't you stay?
Why...can't you come back today?
Why can't I hear you?
Where did you go?
Turned me around,
But now I'll never know.
Every moment your not here it seems
All I want is you next to me, my dear...
So why... why can't you be here?

2#:(Untitled)
So she crawls underneath the blankets one last time
Tosses her phone aside, and hugs her Teddy bear tight
The world isn't ending, my life isn't over,
But her heart may not survive
If you have any heart at all, you'll hide her from
Reality's light.

3#: I Don't Quite See What You See (Duet)
I don't always understand what you're saying (boy
You may have to do some explaining(girl)
Because I don't really know what you mean(boy)
And we're suppose to be two parts of a team(girl)
But I don't quite see what you see. (Together)

I don't quite see what you see (girl)
You say I do all the leavin(boy)
You say I do all the cryin(girl)
I guess we don't quite know who to be(together)
I don't quite see what you see (together)

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

awesome! nice add to #3 i like it even more now lol i might be able to do something with it but not right now though lol nice job

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks buddy :)

[Forever Hidden]

Lovely song! I wish you could come here and sing it for me!

[Hidden Happiness]

A nice song...good jpb:-).

[Amanda]

I can't decide between number 2 and number 3 :P

[Tomislav Petricevic]

The third one is my favorite, probably because of the duet thingy. It just seems like it would make a cool song! Other two are cool too.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks buddy! :)