Forget Me Not
A Poem by ♪The Girl Next Door♪
 I don't want to be forgotten. Only loved.  © 2012 ♪The Girl Next Door♪
Author's Note
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In time you will forget me
Don't deny it, you know it's true.
We may have lost what we used to be.
But all I ever did was love you.
It's hard when I look back to those times.
Now I'm nearly broken hearted.
Forced to sputter it out in rhymes.
I'm right back where I started.
I thought this would be better for me
Letting go and trying to live a little
But part of my heart is still stuck, you see
Now my emotions are nothing more then a riddle.
He told me his secrets after not to long
I brought him up, told him his place
But when in return he asks what's wrong
All I can say is 'Nothing.' With a fake smile plastered to my face.
So as I lay crying in my bed
With all the love and pain you brought
The love you showed, the things you said,
just please. Forget me not.
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Being forgotten by a loved one only means it wasn't true love. That's how I look at it, anyways. And if things didn't work out for you two, that means the real thing still awaits you.
As for the poem itself, I really liked it. A rhyming scheme like this one isn't easy to pull off without ruining the rhythm, and you've managed to do an excellent job.
P.S. I really don't know who could forget you, Kenzie. Even though I know you just over the internet, I can see how amazing you are, and meeting you in person would be the ultimate awesomness.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Tom. I really needed that right now :')
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12 Years Ago
Anytime, bestie. :D
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this is my life in a poem. being forgotten by that one person is the hardest thing to undergo.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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This is good, though a few of the rhymes seemed a little... forced to me. It's beautifully written otherwise, and as others have said, it's a hard rhyming scheme to pull off. Short (well, longer than most of my poems, but relatively short nonetheless) and to the point. You write with such emotion, it's great. Not great that you're feeling the emotion, but great that you can convey it through writing. Excellent work. I give you cyber hugs and brownies.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
I flippin love brownies and hugs! Cyberspace fist bump *best friend status* :P But really, thank you.. read moreI flippin love brownies and hugs! Cyberspace fist bump *best friend status* :P But really, thank you for this. I really appreciate it :)
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12 Years Ago
Haha you're welcome. I don't really like hugs, mostly because my face is approximately at armpit le.. read moreHaha you're welcome. I don't really like hugs, mostly because my face is approximately at armpit level for most... teenage armpits are not the nicest-smelling places. But cyber hugs are acceptable. :)
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12 Years Ago
If we lived near I could give you some homemade chocolate chip cookies. But I don't think ups will d.. read moreIf we lived near I could give you some homemade chocolate chip cookies. But I don't think ups will deliver :/
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12 Years Ago
Yay cyber hugs! Yay cookies! Yay armpits! Wait...nevermind -_-
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12 Years Ago
Armpits with large amounts of deodorant in them are deserving of a yay I believe...
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12 Years Ago
I got a nose-full of BO today. Not nice
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12 Years Ago
My deepest sympathies. Seriously, my nose is spastic. I can tell people apart by their scent.
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12 Years Ago
DUDE NO WAY ME TOO. For me, families have different scents
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12 Years Ago
YES.
And even individual people use different perfumes, shampoos, etc. Plus we all sme.. read moreYES.
And even individual people use different perfumes, shampoos, etc. Plus we all smell different to start with. But BO is narsty.
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12 Years Ago
Totally gross. My friend told me I smelled like birth control pills once...-_- I was lime How do you.. read moreTotally gross. My friend told me I smelled like birth control pills once...-_- I was lime How do you even know what birth control pills smell like o.o
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12 Years Ago
I can honestly say I have no clue what that smells like.
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12 Years Ago
My friend once said I smell like her... uh... yeah. Kinda weird. ...
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12 Years Ago
Just a little xD
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. I was like o.o uh..... ok moving on to the next subject
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12 Years Ago
Okay this is really weird, but I think Robert Downey Jr definitely has my eyes...
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12 Years Ago
At least he has my mom's eyes, and I apparently look exactly like my mom..
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12 Years Ago
Awesome change of subject lol
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12 Years Ago
Oh I wasn't trying to change the subject. I think we posted at the same time cause yours didn't show.. read moreOh I wasn't trying to change the subject. I think we posted at the same time cause yours didn't show up until after I posted mine.
But for all intents and purposes... why thank you. :p
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12 Years Ago
Lol thanks though. It was weird to hear her say that and kinda weird to talk about it xD
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12 Years Ago
I see.
I keep hearing freaky noises from downstairs, and now I'm too scared to go pee.
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12 Years Ago
Well alrighty then lol well while you debate that imma get some sleep lol *determined face* I will b.. read moreWell alrighty then lol well while you debate that imma get some sleep lol *determined face* I will beat insomnia lol
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Hm, we all want to be forgotten by someone, so we can never be bothered by the reminder of them. But if we all forgot there would be no hate, which hate makes us love, which makes us jealous, so we fight, which makes us distraught, and when we get upset, we curse, which makes everyone scared, for they know it won't be long until my body is in the ground and my soul is lost.
~S. D. Blankenship
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thank you for this review
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12 Years Ago
You're welcome. :) I hope I made since.
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12 Years Ago
It did. I got it
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I really "feel" this piece, I'm not sure how else to explain it...a painful scenario but beautifully captured^^
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12 Years Ago
Thank you so much
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12 Years Ago
No problem^^
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No one wants to be forgotten. Beautiful poem
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12 Years Ago
Thank you for the kind review
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dont worry i will never forget you ...lol...BTW great write
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks afraid x3
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12 Years Ago
afraid of what ?
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12 Years Ago
Lol sorry I meant afra. Stupid spell check :P
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12 Years Ago
hahahahahha .....
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If you can't take something in, you always have Maddie to talk to! Or, you can talk to someone else.
Here is a prank video. You might not laugh, but it was quite funny to me.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8QzDhKv4lk
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
She has me too! Lol
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12 Years Ago
Nooooooo! SHE DOESN'T LIKE YOU! YOU ARE EVVVVVIIIILL!
Jkjkjk! Sorry. I'm a bit crazy ri.. read moreNooooooo! SHE DOESN'T LIKE YOU! YOU ARE EVVVVVIIIILL!
Jkjkjk! Sorry. I'm a bit crazy right now, if you couldn't tell! Lol! :D
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12 Years Ago
Lol I'll watch it in a bit
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12 Years Ago
Well that may be true I do have some sangili in me but I have to disagree with the first statement. .. read moreWell that may be true I do have some sangili in me but I have to disagree with the first statement. And uh, if your on drugs why aren't you sharing!? Lol
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12 Years Ago
Because. There mine! MINE I SAY! jk
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12 Years Ago
Why aren't you sharing, huh?
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12 Years Ago
I have been sharing! Just sharing at a reasonable price lol
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12 Years Ago
Lol u guys are crazy
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12 Years Ago
LOL! Mackenzie, feel free to join our "serious" conversation!
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12 Years Ago
Crazy? No no no. Mentally creative
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12 Years Ago
There ya go xP
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12 Years Ago
:P so I really want to eat but there's nothing g to eat and......I have sad face :c
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12 Years Ago
Are you sure there is NOTHING to eat?!
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12 Years Ago
Wait!! My kitten >:)
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12 Years Ago
NOOOO! I WANT TO EAT THE KITTEN! You can have the dog lol
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12 Years Ago
Lol fine we'll trade :P
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12 Years Ago
Wait... is that your neighbors chicken? O.o
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12 Years Ago
Uh....no! What do you mean.... IT'S MY CHICKEN
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12 Years Ago
NO ITS MY CHICKEN!!!!!!!!!
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12 Years Ago
No...I'm hungry for chicken...
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12 Years Ago
It looks big enough for both of us lol
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12 Years Ago
Lol ok we can share c:
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12 Years Ago
NOW LET'S EAT IT!!! >:D
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12 Years Ago
Fried, grilled, baked, boiled, or raw?
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12 Years Ago
Huh what? *looks up with half the chicken hanging out of her mouth, chicken blood running down her c.. read moreHuh what? *looks up with half the chicken hanging out of her mouth, chicken blood running down her chin and feathers stuck to her nose*
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12 Years Ago
Ok well ill just be over here frying mine and you can get back to it
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12 Years Ago
*looks down at the mess she's made and slowly holds up the mangled half chicken* can you fry mine to.. read more*looks down at the mess she's made and slowly holds up the mangled half chicken* can you fry mine too please?
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12 Years Ago
Sure *fries it ~few mins later~* here ya go
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12 Years Ago
Where's my share of it?
You guys should be ashamed of yourselves!
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12 Years Ago
Sweet! Um Seema, you get the dog, a chicken leg, and the cats eyeball.
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12 Years Ago
Or she can have that turtle over there that has been spying on us
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12 Years Ago
YES! "Gobbles everything down is a split second" That's all?
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12 Years Ago
It's okay if you don't have anything else. I have my own dinner to finish!
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12 Years Ago
Lol here have the cat's liver too :P Night guys!
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12 Years Ago
Eww...
Hm, I feel like KFC now.........
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12 Years Ago
Awwwwh bye. And yes. Kfc
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12 Years Ago
Why not Burger King or Mcdonalds? Wait. I think I like KFC better even if I've never tried it before.. read moreWhy not Burger King or Mcdonalds? Wait. I think I like KFC better even if I've never tried it before.
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12 Years Ago
Lol kfc is THE BOMB
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12 Years Ago
Its not a bomb its not da bomb its THE BOMB Lol
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12 Years Ago
I thought you were sleeping. Oh well.
It's not Da bomb. Its my bomb! ;)
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12 Years Ago
Insomnia :'c and xD lol
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12 Years Ago
On this phone youtube takes an hour to load a second lol I will but not soon lol and if its a funny .. read moreOn this phone youtube takes an hour to load a second lol I will but not soon lol and if its a funny prank yap lol
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12 Years Ago
Did you notice you put LOl after every sentence? Lol:D
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12 Years Ago
Yes lol I was wondering if you would lol
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12 Years Ago
4:40 when I post this lol
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12 Years Ago
AM?! Over here it is 5:03 am.
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12 Years Ago
Well yeah it was am now its 2:48pm lol and agreed
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12 Years Ago
I would but I have to go blow up some stuff just for fun lol
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12 Years Ago
*Invades conversation* O.O
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12 Years Ago
HI OTHER WIFEY!!
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12 Years Ago
WE SHOULD MAKE AN LOL BANDIT SYMBOL!!
it should be like....^-.-^ (itza cat)
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12 Years Ago
Alright, I just texted her.
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12 Years Ago
WAITING FOR A REPLY.
AND WAITING...
AND WAITING...
AND WAI-
read moreWAITING FOR A REPLY.
AND WAITING...
AND WAITING...
AND WAI-
SHE SAID YES!!
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12 Years Ago
Everyone. We now have a new member to join our family! Introducing... Mackenzie! Here.
.. read moreEveryone. We now have a new member to join our family! Introducing... Mackenzie! Here.
"Drops 20 pounds of cake in arms"
Go give that to Kenzie. Tell her that it is a present from mwah! ^-.-^
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12 Years Ago
Hello there everyone. I bet your wondering why I called you all in here today. *she says with a buis.. read moreHello there everyone. I bet your wondering why I called you all in here today. *she says with a buisness suit on and serious face~then she explodes and glitter rains down and every one LOLS*
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12 Years Ago
GGGLLLLIIIIITTTTTEEEEERRRRRRRRR RRRRRAAAAAAIIIIIIINNNNNN!!!!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
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12 Years Ago
SHARE WITH ME! ( Even though I did give it to her )
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12 Years Ago
Lol everybody guess what??
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12 Years Ago
I got my hair cut!!! TEE HEE!! and if you'd let me email you, Seema, I would send you a pic.
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12 Years Ago
IMMA WIFEY TOO! I GOTTA KNOW!
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12 Years Ago
No. I NEED TO KNOW!
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12 Years Ago
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????? Can't you put a picture on WC of you?
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12 Years Ago
No no no. Kenzie. Dear. You are Maddie's ex wifey! I'm her wifey!
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12 Years Ago
NO, WE'RE POLYGAMISTS!! (link below to see what that means)
http://www.bing.com/Dicti.. read moreNO, WE'RE POLYGAMISTS!! (link below to see what that means)
http://www.bing.com/Dictionary/search?q=define+polygamy&qpvt=what+is+polygamy%3f&FORM=DTPDIA
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12 Years Ago
Don't tell me it is the 2nd definition!?
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12 Years Ago
Nah. It can't be.
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12 Years Ago
Darn it! I gtg! Bye!
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12 Years Ago
kk by the way, its the 1st definition so uyou're safe, Kenziepie
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12 Years Ago
gots to goooo!!! byee everybodyyyyyyyyy!!!!
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12 Years Ago
Byeeeeee ^-.-^
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12 Years Ago
So now i'm on and everybody is off? Darn it!
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12 Years Ago
I'm still here! * forever alone*
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12 Years Ago
You're always "here"! :P
So. WAASSS UP WIFEY!?
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12 Years Ago
Dude. You seriousley need to catch up! Meaning. Read the things you don't know
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12 Years Ago
Actually yeah I've already read it all :p
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12 Years Ago
Lol. I'M SOOOOOO BORED AND HUNGY.
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12 Years Ago
Ask you're parents to get food from a shop wifey!
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12 Years Ago
I can't. There like "DINNER WILL BE READY SOON SHUT UP KID RAWRZ"
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12 Years Ago
Drop by my house! We have food. I think.
Goes and checks.
Yep. We have fru.. read moreDrop by my house! We have food. I think.
Goes and checks.
Yep. We have fruits, vegtebales, rice, chicken, my cat, and a few fish!
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12 Years Ago
FRUITZ. MMMMM
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12 Years Ago
SERIOUSLEY!??!!! They tell you to shut up!?
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12 Years Ago
Sometimes yeah. I just want meh old, guys!
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12 Years Ago
Really? I don't think so.
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12 Years Ago
*look of someone who doesn't have all gears inside* I like food
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12 Years Ago
Gotta go! Sorry for leaving you all alone Kenzie!
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12 Years Ago
^-.-^ s'okay :)
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12 Years Ago
? Lol are tu shooting lazers at me?
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12 Years Ago
No I'm making lazer sounds
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12 Years Ago
THEN WHAT'S THAT GUN IN YOUR HAND?! *points frantically at the lazer gun in Harley's hand*
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12 Years Ago
Ahem! Plasma gun. And its ma a' huntin' rifle. I'm a' goin' turtle huntin'!
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12 Years Ago
LOL have fun with that
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12 Years Ago
I'm BAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!!!
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*singing* cuz I'm back! Yes I'm back! Yes I'm, baaaaack baaaack yes I'm back in black! I'm back in b.. read more*singing* cuz I'm back! Yes I'm back! Yes I'm, baaaaack baaaack yes I'm back in black! I'm back in blaack! Outta the sack! *guitar*
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12 Years Ago
WHOO GET SOME AC/DC UP IN HERE!!! *starts dancin*
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12 Years Ago
WOOP WOOP! XD
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12 Years Ago
I8 think were the only ones still here
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12 Years Ago
Mmmmmmmm. Turtles
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12 Years Ago
YOU THOUGHT WRONG
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12 Years Ago
So what xD PARTY OF THREE!!!! Whoops, make that party of two. Gotta take a piss break. xD
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12 Years Ago
I'll be back. Gotta check my RP forums
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12 Years Ago
Aaaaand my supper is almost done. You guys know how much I love food. Sorry kenzie ill stay on as lo.. read moreAaaaand my supper is almost done. You guys know how much I love food. Sorry kenzie ill stay on as long as possible though!
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12 Years Ago
Okie dokie!! I'm empty of fluids and ready to party!!!! xD LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.. read moreOkie dokie!! I'm empty of fluids and ready to party!!!! xD LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!
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DUDE I LOVE FOOD AND IM STARVING. SO HUNGRY. HAVE TO GO. BYE.
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12 Years Ago
Me too. Bedroom cleaning day., Wish me luck that I don't get eaten by whatever is living under my be.. read moreMe too. Bedroom cleaning day., Wish me luck that I don't get eaten by whatever is living under my bed. Byee.
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12 Years Ago
I'm back lol if anyone is still there message me
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12 Years Ago
I'm here, Harwee!!!
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12 Years Ago
LOL! Maddie, is the stuff under you're bed that bad!?
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12 Years Ago
Yes yes it is
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12 Years Ago
THE LOL BANDITS UNITE!
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12 Years Ago
ICE CREAM FOR DINNER!!!!!!
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12 Years Ago
WE SPAMMED THIS PAGE BADLY! I WONDER IF ANYONE IS STALKING US.
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12 Years Ago
The goverment is always stalking us
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12 Years Ago
Wait.
THAT MEANS THAT THE PRESIDENT HAS SEEN MY BREASTICLES!!??
Hell yeah I just inve.. read moreWait.
THAT MEANS THAT THE PRESIDENT HAS SEEN MY BREASTICLES!!??
Hell yeah I just invented that word.
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12 Years Ago
Hey wait I thought you had to go ... uh... have fun maddie? XD
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12 Years Ago
Huh? Definition please?!
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12 Years Ago
Are you cleaning you're room and chatting?
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12 Years Ago
Lol he's not here yet, Harley.
Breasticles (n) bre•sta•culs
1. A woman's c.. read moreLol he's not here yet, Harley.
Breasticles (n) bre•sta•culs
1. A woman's chest.
Synonyms:
boobage, cleavage, etc.
LOLOLOLOLOLOL
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12 Years Ago
MADDIE! Be appropriate! My sis has a WC too, so if she stalk me and sees this, we are never going to.. read moreMADDIE! Be appropriate! My sis has a WC too, so if she stalk me and sees this, we are never going to emial each other!
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12 Years Ago
Lol hey maddie imma use that word kay? Imma txt my best friend xD
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12 Years Ago
Puh-lease, Seema xD lol HE'S HERE!!!! GOTTA GO!!!
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12 Years Ago
Have a good one!
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12 Years Ago
Keep it oldschool!!!
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12 Years Ago
LOL BREASTICLES XD Love you wifey XP no homo of course :P So I'm backI ha d a jolly rancher popsicle.. read moreLOL BREASTICLES XD Love you wifey XP no homo of course :P So I'm backI ha d a jolly rancher popsicle :O
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12 Years Ago
See Kenzie? You do have food!
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12 Years Ago
Yeah yeah! I had a salad too ^_^ Food makes Meh soooooooooo happay!
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12 Years Ago
NOOOOooo. ICE CREAM DOES! And of course. Chocolate!
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12 Years Ago
Welp I gotta leave for a min or two don't miss me
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12 Years Ago
Nooooooooooooo
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12 Years Ago
HOW COULD YOU DI THIS TOO ME HARLEY?! *breaks down crying*
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12 Years Ago
What did I do?
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12 Years Ago
YOU LEFT ME. FOR A FEW MINUTES!!!!! XD
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XD but its ok cuz were not married! Maddie is leaving you for who knows how long lol
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12 Years Ago
Oh yeah... MADDIE!!!!!! :P
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12 Years Ago
WHO WANTS TO GO STALK HER?! ^-.-^
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12 Years Ago
She's home alone with her bf watching insidious.
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12 Years Ago
She already has a bf? I thought she just got out of a relationship
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. She didn't tell you, did she?
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Hey y'all xD I'm putting my pajammies on and I figured I'd drop in xD Damn you all can't go anhour w.. read moreHey y'all xD I'm putting my pajammies on and I figured I'd drop in xD Damn you all can't go anhour without talking about me? I'm flattered :)
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. And so. People do it all the time. I have before. Well jumping into relationships not watching.. read moreYeah. And so. People do it all the time. I have before. Well jumping into relationships not watching insidious lol
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12 Years Ago
Kenzie- yeah I did, but I decided that this guy I know is better for me. I think I'm in love *mushy .. read moreKenzie- yeah I did, but I decided that this guy I know is better for me. I think I'm in love *mushy eyes*
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12 Years Ago
Meee tooo lol xD omg song reminder! Eddy money "I think I'm in love"
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12 Years Ago
Stfu harley lol ^-.-^ jkjkjk i still wuv u (like a bro)
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12 Years Ago
LOL! YES MADDIE WE CAN'T! You're just that loved!
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12 Years Ago
Why did ya say stfu? I'm confused
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12 Years Ago
Well alrighty then. Whatever you wanna do wifey :) You're choice
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12 Years Ago
Oh yay lol Seema xD I gotta log off soon bcuz my bf is screaming at me to hurry up so we can watch t.. read moreOh yay lol Seema xD I gotta log off soon bcuz my bf is screaming at me to hurry up so we can watch the movie :P
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12 Years Ago
I crave popcorn ^-.-^
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12 Years Ago
I'm out guys see ya! I might be online later
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12 Years Ago
Go dear! RUN AS FAST AS THE WIND!
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12 Years Ago
I'm out to. Peace out, Lol bandits! ^-.-^
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12 Years Ago
Everyone is gone! I will should leave too! BYE!
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12 Years Ago
I'm online if anyone else is xD
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12 Years Ago
Its already over? Wow well I'm about to get off and call my friend but I could txt if ya wanna talk
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12 Years Ago
alright. I'll text ya right now
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12 Years Ago
And then there was one.. >:D
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12 Years Ago
Awesome :D What's up Harley?
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12 Years Ago
Can we move this to a message thread? Its getting hard for this phone to load this page lol
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12 Years Ago
Or a comment thread :D
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12 Years Ago
Lol why don't we just text?
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12 Years Ago
That's even better cuz it won't use up my data plan lol
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12 Years Ago
So. How did it go Maddie?
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12 Years Ago
Ehm, not well. He was texting this other girl and he called her babe, so then we got in a fight. The.. read moreEhm, not well. He was texting this other girl and he called her babe, so then we got in a fight. Then he called me and made me listen to him hanging out with my friend Sandra, and then they started to make out. I'm crushed. Harley called him a womanizer.
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12 Years Ago
Well its true
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12 Years Ago
And I could've said worse
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12 Years Ago
Yeah I know about your wide range in vocabulary.
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12 Years Ago
VOCABLURARY. EHEH.
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12 Years Ago
That's my initials 2 times lol
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12 Years Ago
X) Gotta go, I'm headed to the mall with by best friend :D See y'all later
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12 Years Ago
Noooooooooooo! Oh awh your leaving :/ but nooooooooo! No more maximum ride :d
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12 Years Ago
Wow! You guys are ALWAYS on and the best of things happen when I'm sleeping. WHY!?
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12 Years Ago
WHAT?! I'M GOING RIGHT NOW TO HIS HOUSE AND TALK SOME SENSE TO HIM!
If you like him, an.. read moreWHAT?! I'M GOING RIGHT NOW TO HIS HOUSE AND TALK SOME SENSE TO HIM!
If you like him, and he doesn't like you, then move on. I mean, there are lot of guys in the world that like you for who you are. Like Harley! XD jkjkjkj
But you get the point, right?
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. I'll be okay.
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12 Years Ago
"CLAPS" You're writing was on "Today's Top Writing"!
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12 Years Ago
Uh I'm glad your joking up there xD and everything else yeah. Its ok maddie you know what I said
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12 Years Ago
HOWS THE LOL TEMIO DOING?!
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12 Years Ago
SUPER CRAZY!!
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12 Years Ago
Heyyyyyyyyyy xD I totally forgot about this little thang xD
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12 Years Ago
LOL! MADDIE IS BACK!
"everyone claps"
I missed you! You are almost NVR on.. read moreLOL! MADDIE IS BACK!
"everyone claps"
I missed you! You are almost NVR on!
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12 Years Ago
I have school, silly Seema xD UYnlike you, who is homeskooled. So whats up?
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12 Years Ago
Ugh. I hate homeschooling! Nothing. I'm piled with home work! At school I would usually just do one .. read moreUgh. I hate homeschooling! Nothing. I'm piled with home work! At school I would usually just do one hsitory lesson. Over in homeschooling, I have to do 2 of each subject wich take one or two hours each!
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12 Years Ago
Any ideas how I can convince my dad to STOP homeschooling?
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12 Years Ago
When does school end for you?
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12 Years Ago
June 8th I believe. You?
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12 Years Ago
Like timing?
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12 Years Ago
Me. Hmmmm. Lemme check!
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12 Years Ago
just ask to not be homeschooled. give your reasons and yall c'n work somthin' out.
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12 Years Ago
I hope Harley.. :/
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12 Years Ago
Nice accent, but Harley, you're so not from Tennesee xD
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12 Years Ago
Derpa. That is all.
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12 Years Ago
@ Maddie LOL! Upload one more picture please! I want to see another pic of you!
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12 Years Ago
no but im from a family thats serious country and.. im saying everything i type. it feels .... right.. read moreno but im from a family thats serious country and.. im saying everything i type. it feels .... right. better than i normally talk kinda. if that makes any sense
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12 Years Ago
@ Kenzie huh?
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12 Years Ago
I hate homeschooling. And maddie, I have the heck no idea when school ends for me!
Yea.. read moreI hate homeschooling. And maddie, I have the heck no idea when school ends for me!
Yeah. I know. i'm stupid! XD
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12 Years Ago
DERPA! THAT IS ALL!
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12 Years Ago
DERPAS!?!?!?! I LOVE DERPAS! SOME OF MY BEST FRIENDS IS DERPAS!! xD
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12 Years Ago
Okay, Seema, I took a pic of myself and I'm uploading it right now xD
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12 Years Ago
"squeals like a little kid"
YES!
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12 Years Ago
no offense but when you said for her to upload another pic you kiiiiinda sounded like a stalker frea.. read moreno offense but when you said for her to upload another pic you kiiiiinda sounded like a stalker freak o.o lol
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12 Years Ago
LOL! Bcuz on her first picture and her second picture and her profile picture she looks hecka differ.. read moreLOL! Bcuz on her first picture and her second picture and her profile picture she looks hecka different!
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12 Years Ago
Because I got a haircut lol
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12 Years Ago
Ohhhh. But your hair is straight on first picture but the second pic your hair is all wavy.
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12 Years Ago
bcuz my hair is naturally really really really curly. Like, a perm. That's how curly my hair is. Whe.. read morebcuz my hair is naturally really really really curly. Like, a perm. That's how curly my hair is. When I straighen it, it either is wavy or just flat straight. depends on how much me I work on it xD lol that sounded wrong xD lmao
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12 Years Ago
Oh. Now my comments sound stupid!
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12 Years Ago
Maddie please don't cuss. My sister is literally stalking me and she's going to tell my parents and .. read moreMaddie please don't cuss. My sister is literally stalking me and she's going to tell my parents and then we can NVR talk again.
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12 Years Ago
OKay fiiiiiine xD
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12 Years Ago
Thank you! I owe you one!
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12 Years Ago
This use to be the days when Maddie me and Harley all use to hang out virtually, laughing our head o.. read moreThis use to be the days when Maddie me and Harley all use to hang out virtually, laughing our head off and just having fun.... This use to be the ol' days
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12 Years Ago
Yeah. I don't hear much from her anymore. We've grown distant. But at least she's happy and ok I thi.. read moreYeah. I don't hear much from her anymore. We've grown distant. But at least she's happy and ok I think.
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12 Years Ago
I don't think so. I don't know if David wants you to know. Ask him but something happened that I don.. read moreI don't think so. I don't know if David wants you to know. Ask him but something happened that I don't want to mention right here out publiclly
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12 Years Ago
I don't have a right mentioning it out here so i should stay quiet
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i loved it.
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Awesome poem! One thing. HOW IN THE WORLD COULD SOMEONE FORGET YOU??!!? Lol but really. Awesome job!
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
Thanks buddy :)
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Being forgotten by a loved one only means it wasn't true love. That's how I look at it, anyways. And if things didn't work out for you two, that means the real thing still awaits you.
As for the poem itself, I really liked it. A rhyming scheme like this one isn't easy to pull off without ruining the rhythm, and you've managed to do an excellent job.
P.S. I really don't know who could forget you, Kenzie. Even though I know you just over the internet, I can see how amazing you are, and meeting you in person would be the ultimate awesomness.
Posted 12 Years Ago
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Tom. I really needed that right now :')
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12 Years Ago
Anytime, bestie. :D
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My name's Makenzie and I'm extremely insane. If I were a super hero my super hero name would either be Captain Procrastination or Sarcastimaster. P.S. also by the way, I'm a confessed crazy cat lady. .. more..
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