People Pain

Everyone has pain in they're life, and everyone has different ways to deal with it, but no ones pain is more qualified to be recognized then anothers.

There's the girl

who sits alone in class

Nose-deep in a book

secretly argueing with her past

Scars she's endured

she tries to hide

she'll only get more

if she gets on daddy's bad side.

And that's the boy

who gets shoved around

walks home alone

with out a sound.

He plays his music loud

to drown out his pains

and cries for help

on his wrist, red stains

So who's that s**t

every week, a new ex

All that's in her think blonde head

Is make-up, money and sex

But underneath

all the fame

she's not loved at all

her heart's just the same

And there's that guy

he's on 3 sports teams

beats up kids for fun

but he's more then he seems

When he was young

back when love, he didn't lack

but then his daddy left

and he never came back

 

Hello there, miss

who dances in the rain

seems happy at first

but then you see her pain

Her life is good

but she's still depressed

craving love is hard

and left her distressed

 

So when you're feeling down,

just stay true to you

find good friends that care

and you'll make it through.

 

Author's Note

please review. This one took me a while to write, due to writers block and 0 inspiration. Also, if you find that you fit into any of these catagories of people, let me know in your review! :D

Reviews

[MadiKay]

Very inspiring. I love it! I can relate to some of those stanzas..Anyways, incredible job!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks so much Maddie!

[The Watcher]

Very intense, but true as well. I can definitely relate to this both personally and what I've observed in hundreds of people throughout the years. Well written Makenzie, and kudos!

100/100

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you so much!

[The Watcher]

You're very welcome!

[aisling virginia]

Aw Kenz, this is so beautiful, I love it. You're use of rhyming is amazing! I personally can't rhyme to save my life. Again, I love it.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Haha! Well if it ever comes down to it, I'll use my rhyming to save your life ;) thanks ling ling!

[aisling virginia]

tanks! i know u will. X3

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

XD

[aisling virginia]

:P

[aisling virginia]

kmdofnwlkaind

[Pax]

the format and coloring are very nice, it separates each thoughts completely. I like what you done, glad that you came back to writing again. Writer's block is hard, we all suffer from it. I do picture prompts now, for me to keep up on writing..

keep writing.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you so much :)

[afra]

wow this was amazing ...good job

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks

[Morrigan Nicole]

I think that you did a very fine job on it, I liked it a lot!!!! Wonderful! Very inspiring.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you

[Harley (arbiter)]

One of the greatist poems I've read on here. I can relate to some of this stuff aswell. Great job

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks so much :)

[Amanda]

I like this a lot. I think I can relate with the first two stanzas the most. Hope you get over your writer's block soon, all your writing is great. It really hits close to home.