FOOD

Me and food. We go waaay back XD

Doughtnuts, so puffy and sweet,

Cupckaes, no other can beat

Cookies, we'll be together til the end

Crescents, one of my best friends

 

Brownies, so choclatey good

Cream puffs, I don't think I should

Lemon bars, so tangy and tart

Cinnamon rolls, till death do us part

 

Pastries are my life,

but there is much more to see

for what cuts with a knife

what's juicy is in my sight

that's where I want to be

 

Fried chicken, so cripsy with salt

Sirloin steak, drives me to a halt

Cheese burgers, you complete me

Ham, it's you I want to see

 

But most amazing of all

My biggest down fall

Is bacon, so fatty and crisp

an opprotunity, I won't miss

 

Moving right along,

Love is in the air

Nature's singing her song,

So sweet and savory, it's where I belong

It's so good, I refuse to share

 

Apples, red and green

Strawberries, best fruit I've ever seen

Bananas, soft and light

Grapes, make my day bright

 

Pomegranites, sweet and sour

Avacados, they've got the power

Pears, melt-in-my-mouth smooth

Cherries, always a good move.

 

Just don't bring up the garden

it's where the demons lurk

my heart, I harden

my gags, you'll have to parden

because vegetables are the devil's work !

 

So much more food I've yet to name

if you love eating, don't feel ashamed.

I'm so hungry, I'm starving to death!

I'll always crave food, till my very last breath.

 

 

Author's Note

Boom ;)

Reviews

[Kitty Robinson]

to be honest I feel kinda hungry at the moment, lol

[Dr. Wood ?]

it is true that none of us can love without food...so maybe they are meant for each other...But Pardon has an O....not an E.......Otherwise...great!

[MadiKay]

Yes, I think that you should do a "Food 2" because this one was amazing....It would be awesome and i would totally read it! I promise. It would be excellent and make me hungry all over again! :D

[Lena Rossmore]

Awesome poem! My mouth was watering just reading it!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you! Mine W's watering when I was writing it!

[Krista Weiss]

Wow :) haha nice job!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

XD awesome job!!!!! this was so cool

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks man :)

[Cole Hayley]

God, I'm hungry now hahahha. A great and humours piece. I like this one a lot simply for the fact its diffrent.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Haha, this is epic! I love it how you used those "serious" lines and references to bring out the goofy theme of the poem. And the stanza about vegetables was just too funny! "vegetables are the devil's work" xD
Cool job, Kenzie, and I think I'll go eat something now. XD

[Dean Kuch®]

Heh, I think I gained about ten pounds by reading this! Really liked the flow and playfulness of your ode to food, not to mention all yummy goodies you devoted it to!
Oh crap, now I'm hungry again...

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Bahaha! Mission accomplished >:) *demonic smile*

[Olivia Marie]

It was awesome I loved it :) It made me wanna get some bacon :D Just a couple typos I noticed. Donuts* Cupcakes* Chocolaty* Pomegranates* I have auto-correct on my keyboard so that should be right, but I could be wrong :) Overall: Excellent! XD