FOOD

Me and food. We go waaay back XD

Doughtnuts, so puffy and sweet,

Cupckaes, no other can beat

Cookies, we'll be together til the end

Crescents, one of my best friends

 

Brownies, so choclatey good

Cream puffs, I don't think I should

Lemon bars, so tangy and tart

Cinnamon rolls, till death do us part

 

Pastries are my life,

but there is much more to see

for what cuts with a knife

what's juicy is in my sight

that's where I want to be

 

Fried chicken, so cripsy with salt

Sirloin steak, drives me to a halt

Cheese burgers, you complete me

Ham, it's you I want to see

 

But most amazing of all

My biggest down fall

Is bacon, so fatty and crisp

an opprotunity, I won't miss

 

Moving right along,

Love is in the air

Nature's singing her song,

So sweet and savory, it's where I belong

It's so good, I refuse to share

 

Apples, red and green

Strawberries, best fruit I've ever seen

Bananas, soft and light

Grapes, make my day bright

 

Pomegranites, sweet and sour

Avacados, they've got the power

Pears, melt-in-my-mouth smooth

Cherries, always a good move.

 

Just don't bring up the garden

it's where the demons lurk

my heart, I harden

my gags, you'll have to parden

because vegetables are the devil's work !

 

So much more food I've yet to name

if you love eating, don't feel ashamed.

I'm so hungry, I'm starving to death!

I'll always crave food, till my very last breath.

 

 

Author's Note

Boom ;)

Reviews

[A. V. Madison]

Oh wifey, how you are so crazy sometimes xD

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

You know it! XD

[Jordan Easley]

I think you mean croissants, not "crescents" (maybe?? I don't know). Other than that, good poem. I liked the rhyming scheme. I can see this in a children's or adolescent's book. Reminds me of something I saw in a poem book I had when I was, like, 12. Good job.

[deepblue04]

This is amazing! I like the rhyming scheme!!! Good job!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you!

[Lonti Buzzfern]

That was awesome. It was humorous and my mouth was watering while reading it.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

My mouth was watering while writing it! XD thank you!

[Lonti Buzzfern]

You're welcome!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

So do you think I should make a FOOD2?

[Lonti Buzzfern]

Yes, yes of course you should.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Alright! I'll get to work on it then!

[Tai Ryens]

Humorous poetry, made me chuckle, especially the part about vegetables and the devil. Brilliant.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Vegetables....eww.... :P Thanks for the review!

[Pax]

this is really nice, i like how you used the foods almost all of us we daily eat, great used of it.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you very much :)

[Wolfwind]

This was really cool! lol Nothing better to get the imagination going than a whole bunch of food falling from the mind. Great Ink!

Aaron

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank a lot!

[Kerri Hart]

lol I LOVED IT

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks!

[:DI laugh too much:D]

lol I loved this, you made me so hungry!!! The poem was great, from the descriptions of the food right down to the flow and how you made the words rhyme.

Btw, I totally agree with you, I hate vegetables too. lol

Awesome job :]

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oh my gosh i love this poem. i wuv strawberries :3 amazing poem, really.