FOOD

Me and food. We go waaay back XD

Doughtnuts, so puffy and sweet,

Cupckaes, no other can beat

Cookies, we'll be together til the end

Crescents, one of my best friends

 

Brownies, so choclatey good

Cream puffs, I don't think I should

Lemon bars, so tangy and tart

Cinnamon rolls, till death do us part

 

Pastries are my life,

but there is much more to see

for what cuts with a knife

what's juicy is in my sight

that's where I want to be

 

Fried chicken, so cripsy with salt

Sirloin steak, drives me to a halt

Cheese burgers, you complete me

Ham, it's you I want to see

 

But most amazing of all

My biggest down fall

Is bacon, so fatty and crisp

an opprotunity, I won't miss

 

Moving right along,

Love is in the air

Nature's singing her song,

So sweet and savory, it's where I belong

It's so good, I refuse to share

 

Apples, red and green

Strawberries, best fruit I've ever seen

Bananas, soft and light

Grapes, make my day bright

 

Pomegranites, sweet and sour

Avacados, they've got the power

Pears, melt-in-my-mouth smooth

Cherries, always a good move.

 

Just don't bring up the garden

it's where the demons lurk

my heart, I harden

my gags, you'll have to parden

because vegetables are the devil's work !

 

So much more food I've yet to name

if you love eating, don't feel ashamed.

I'm so hungry, I'm starving to death!

I'll always crave food, till my very last breath.

 

 

Author's Note

Boom ;)

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

This poem made me want to go get a snack.... I'm not sure if I should be happy that your poem could influence me or sad because I just ate a doughnut... :)

[Forever Hidden]

Same with my sister. My mom tells her something to do. She says no. Mom threatens sis she won't give any food. Sis goes and does it.

[Invisible]

food is yummy, i'll give you that.

[icerhex]

Wow im starving now! (by the way cupcakes is spelt wrong in the first stanza.) Well done!

[Matt Evans]

Wow, thanks for reminding me that i'm f****n starving and there is no food in my house! Oh wait, dear god, there is a bag of Doritos in my writing desk... $.$

On a serious note; great poem, i didn't waste my time reading this! :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks so much! And doritos are always good :)

[Matt Evans]

Can you say spicy nacho feast? Ah, s**t, i got cheese on my keyboard. #Fatmaninaskinnybodyissues. Sorry, i'm a chatterbox ;)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

No problem! I am too! :P Lol

[Matt Evans]

Well that's why we kick a*s, obviously. Psh, other skinny people don't got s**t on our abs!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Omg. Totally XD

[Matt Evans]

hahaha idk you, but we win, forget all the other haters, we. freaking. win.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Hell yeah. Screw the haters. We've got our f****n doritos. We don't need them.

[Matt Evans]

That's what i'm sayin! We got our writing, and our abs, Doritos, and idk about you, but im watching workaholics, so life's good. ^.^

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Lol! I wish I could say the same, I'm dealing with my emotional best friend who's having relationship issues. -_-

[Matt Evans]

Oh boy... thank goddd i'm a dude, and thank god i'm in college, cause i don't have to deal with anyy of that crap!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Lucky you! :P

[Matt Evans]

Well here's my advice for her. Your young, get over it, cause if things aren't working out, then they aren't meant to be!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

If only she it was that easy. XD Ahhhh. The joys of being a teenager. -_-

[Matt Evans]

We all go through that and it can be a pain hahaha

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Yes yes it can. :P

[silkysheets]

This indeed arouses my hunger hahah. This is brilliant, to make something so awesome out of something so simply, something we encounter on daily basis without thinking about it.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Well idk about you, but I'm constantly thinking about it XD thanks for the review!

[silkysheets]

No problem :)

[Gretchen Clarke]

*crosses arms* What's wrong with veggies?
I like anything, really...except for celery, spinach, brussel sprouts, and cabbage.
Dude, you forgot the best of all: ICE CREAM!! XD
Very funny. I like the description. "Me and food. We go waaay back XD" My favorite part! XD
The description of each food item was very good. If it weren't 12 o' clock, I'd probably be drooling right now. XD Great job!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks! I think I'm gonna write a FOOD2 about junk food, Cuz honey ice cream ain't the only thing I forgot XD thanks again!

[Gretchen Clarke]

Alright. You'll have to give me a read request when you do make it, though.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Of course ;)

[Gretchen Clarke]

Thanks!
By the way, can you review my book, 'Howling and Roaring in the Night'?

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Sure! I'll do that right now!

[David the writer]

Your poem wuz great! I'm hungry now, but that's awesome cause that means that you expressed a "feeling" (Yeah hunger is a feeling cause you feel it). "FLAWLESS VICTORY!"

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks man :)

[David the writer]

Thank u

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

:D

[Abbie]

A MAZ ING!!!!!!!!!!! I never knew a poem about food could be so awesome!!!!!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Oh it can :)

[Abbie]

Obviously! this was astounding!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks so much!

[Abbie]

you're totally welcome! :D

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

:3

[Abbie]

:D