Vibrations

I was listening to some live music while waiting for my mom, so basically i took a literal situation and made it not literal? This was also for school, I tend to write better when it's not...

Vibration

Boom thrash

Ba boom thrash

ching

 

Drums and guitars beating and

creating music

sending my head

into a flurry of

emotions

sounds

senses

 

My head is overwhelmed

But I can keep

the beat on my feet

if i get bored.

 

I've been left here

But not alone.

The music is something

I can feel

Like a person

My brothers

My sister

and the guitarists

are felt in the music

like people are in

the vibrations

of the strings,

the crash of the drums

 

I am no longer

so scared.

 

 

Author's Note

Meh, not very good...especially my onomatopoeia... any suggestions would be lovely

Reviews

[Raymond Federle]

Oh not at all. I was just commenting about music moments ago. This is a wonderful poem. You took a situation and turned it into art and you expressed the feeling excellently! Well done. You are an artist... and that's what we do! :)