9/26/16

I know I'm still young

But I know what love is

And if this isn't love

I don't know what is

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a nicely crafted phrase becuz of the way you turn around your way of stating it . . . from "I know what love is" . . . to "I don't know what is" . . . very clever & well-stated. But all in all, this is not enuf for me . . . I want to be shown more about this from your point of view. One clever statement does not create a complete message . . . for me, poetry must convey more about this point you want to make. Consider including more sensory information . . . how does love look, sound, feel, smell, or taste? Convince me that this is what you say it is.

[Bear]

A statement of self-expression it is enforced by the power of your convictions and protected from scrutiny by vague details that allow's the reader's imagination to come into play. Very well done and in so few words Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Jacob Clifford]

Very accurate expression of what love can feel like for young people.