Valentines Day Mistakes

Valentines Day Mistakes

A Poem by K.M

You told me you would never leave me
And I don't know why I believed you
You promised and said you needed me...
But why in the hell did I need you?

The day that you left
You didn't even say goodbye
You said you wouldn't go
That was a lie
And I promised myself I wouldn't cry
Not this time

That one night 
The one when we were in your car
I didn't think you'd take it that far
And when we drove to the lake...
I knew that was a mistake
But it was a risk I was willing to take
Because your body felt so warm against mine
Tears started filling my eyes
Because in that moment I knew...
That you would never love me
The way I loved you 

© 2016 K.M


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Take two to love and true love. Is slow and easy.
"That you would never love me
The way I loved you "
I liked the above lines. We do know truth from lies. Thank you Kenzie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Lovely poem!
Keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Take two to love and true love. Is slow and easy.
"That you would never love me
The way I loved you "
I liked the above lines. We do know truth from lies. Thank you Kenzie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ouchie, this is so sad Kenzie. :(

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am trying to write my own poetry book... so I need some serious feedback (: All of my poems are about things that have happened to me or people in my life. I hope you guys like my poetry. more..

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