Sonnet 17

Sonnet 17

A Poem by K.M

The backseats view wasn't bad at all
Those tear stained nights weren't wrong
Can't believe you didn't even call
I still am singing that song

Do you still remember that day?
The night the stars only saw us
I fell in love way back in may
Now you are riding the Ant bus

I hope this love will never fade
Don't turn to dated memories
My soul surely will start to degrade
Just remember the morning glories

Now you are so close, I can feel you're breath
And I pray that this will not be our death 

© 2015 K.M


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You conveyed great emotion and intensity. What a sweet poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We always home love will never fade and sometimes we don't get a choice. :) I enjoyed your words Kenzie :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Very nice poem!
I really liked it!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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My heart start run fast. You words remains me all my loves. What we did together . How we feel when our wings was too storng. THANKS FOR THAT.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Hey Kenzie, Great rhyming pattern. I loved "tear stained nights" excuse my ignorance though, what is an ant bus?

Posted 8 Years Ago


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K.M

8 Years Ago

Oh, haha it's fine :) The Ant bus is the name of the bus that I ride to and from school :)

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