Candles

Candles

A Poem by K.M

When I blow out my Dandelion candles,
I wish for you

© 2015 K.M


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This was short but very sweet...
You know, the simplest ideas can become the powerful ones at the same time...
Great job!

Your Friend,
C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~I love the correlation between the two. Short, yes--but quite effective.~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short but nice. Thanks for sharing


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much wistful loving in so few words. Well done Kenzie.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 10, 2015
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I am trying to write my own poetry book... so I need some serious feedback (: All of my poems are about things that have happened to me or people in my life. I hope you guys like my poetry. more..

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