Killing Darkness

My shadow is what I feel
Forgotten, depressed, unloved
Nothing but a gray scale to God
And my heart
Its broken glass
It cannot be put back together
Whenever you try your hopes get shattered
My hands are tired
They want to be held
My tears are criminals
They need to be locked away
My lungs are slothful
They need to work
And my smile
Is tearing at the seams
I need it to stay
Please don't give up
Its just one more day
Just one more
They can't find out
Please don't let them know
The pain is too much
I hope it will end
Then smile
You can give in

Reviews

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Moments that all of us live with at different times in our lives... darkness will always exist but remember there is a light, somewhere, to balance that darkness; sometimes we have to search it out... you write very well and you are very expressive... good work

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem with simple and good wisdom.
"Please don't give up
Its just one more day
Just one more"
Sometime we need help and sometime we must help another. Kind and hopeful words and friendship is needed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote