Legends

The legend is that when you can't sleep at night,
It is because someone is thinking about you
I could stay up all night and know that no one is thinking about me
Especially not him

Tell me, was it hope or was it fear?
Were those raindrops or were they tears?
Did you lie because you thought the truth would hurt?

I do not know
But you do
Why do you build up the wall between us?
Are you afraid of falling in love, little boy
Is your heart to young?

There is not going to be a funeral.
So stop worrying about dying
Because the only one that is dying is me
Not you
So let me in from outside
It is so cold
I promise you will be okay
You will be fine

Reviews

[Reeg]

This is inspiring.
it reminds me of a mental exercise my teacher gave me once.
he said think of an idea anyone can understand, then deconstruct it untill it is no longer true, then finally relate it to yourself.
That teacher had me writing stories about why i think the north and south pole are points on the equator to people who only look east and west. (not that you did that, it just makes me think xD )
ANYWAY. This poem is enjoyable in alot of ways. I Like :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic of the statement.
"The legend is that when you can't sleep at night,
It is because someone is thinking about you"
I believe when sleep is interrupted. It is us too. Hoping foe things in the lost and can't be found. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote