Painted on Eyes

Painted on Eyes

A Poem by K.M

When I am around you
I feel like my eyes are painted on
You can't see my fears
You can't see my tears
You can't see my pain
And you can't see every time my heart breaks
I wish you could see
But no one can see beyond my eye color
I wish you knew how I looked and felt inside
But for now you can just look at my
Painted on eyes

© 2015 K.M


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They say ''Eyes are the window of the soul'' what you describe is window with shut curtains; and if someone tell you ''I see the word reflected in your eyes'' is that the light out side outweigh the light from inside Who knows what's lie behind those windows of yours Kenzie put the lights on and let us peep inside

Posted 9 Years Ago


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They say ''Eyes are the window of the soul'' what you describe is window with shut curtains; and if someone tell you ''I see the word reflected in your eyes'' is that the light out side outweigh the light from inside Who knows what's lie behind those windows of yours Kenzie put the lights on and let us peep inside

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow... an another amazing poem!
There was so much emotion. I see so much potential in ypur writing and you have your own style of writing that is very enjoyable to read...

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this Kenzie! Sometimes people cannot see beyond the outer appearance and they miss what is really going on deep inside!!


Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 21, 2015
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