1. Banners in the June sun exhort me: Celebrate Washington Park--- a design of green, ringed in red with brick row houses under a light blue
sky. So, I exalt the big canopy beeches with amputated arms and wings like bats, oaks---solid and heavy with hair like Medusa, gnarled old maples,
knuckles full of arthritis. I exalt the locusts with trunks like barber poles, and the ‘tree of heaven’ with its ancient warts and angel wings at the end of its
branches, flying among the star-like leaves of a nearby sweet gum tree.
2. I Celebrate Washington Park and applaud Albany’s lunch hour ladies who trade office shoes for sneakers to stride among mid-day joggers.
Silently, I cheer on the old guys, half bent over, chatting airily with each other, while they admire the young women---quiet and serious in their
runner’s ritual, coursing among men with ties and i.d. badges. I cheer on a stiff---armed blond with a capacious behind under a flowered dress.
Should I extol the wannabe beauty as she appraises the boys with their big bounding dogs? A cigarette hangs from her painted mouth like an arrow
in a bulls eye. Sure, why not?! I commend the Albany cops keeping a relaxed watch over playground kids, and praise the little black girl gliding
off with dad on training wheels down a beaten path---heading somewhere into tomorrow. Here's praying all goes well on your journey of life. Be safe.
3. Here at midday in Washington Park, space and time stop stretching, every thing holds back for an hour or two. Even the statue of Robert Burns, with
his floppy hat in hand and fat finger marking a book, comes alive---a bemused smile on his blackened- bronze face as he watches the traffic
flow beyond neatly laid rose beds. At noon space and time stop stretching so a quiet man can sit against the trunk of a towering tree, its leaves shading his
thoughts from the heat of the sun, while a bare-chested fellow with a pony tail greedily soaks in its rays through a haze of cigarette smoke. Everything waits as
two women sit at a picnic table peering through photos like CIA analysts, while, nearby, a haggard gray haired joe in a dirty baseball cap reads a newspaper
and picks his nose. Everything waits until I greet an oncoming giant with a “how are ya?” and he looks up with a sudden smile and proclaims,
Considering this beautiful day---I would say, definitely, I’m doing good!
Frank O'Hara was known for his "I do this, I do that" poetry as he wandered around NYC
on his lunch hours back in 1950's. I wrote this poem about my wanderings as my wife was receiving treatments for her MD in the hospital.
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I love the fullness of this--the imagery and action. It's like nature watching, but we are watching civilization which has its own nature which is separate from those things which just are. The intricacies of all of this. The way so many people are inhabiting the same space but going about their business separately. It's like a book of short stories that is only beginning.
When I saw your title I thought of the Henry James book with the same name, and was interested to see if that figured in the poem. So, I was pleasantly surprised to join you for an afternoon of people watching and celebrating the everydayness of life.
I enjoy Frank O'Hara's work. My favorite poem by him is To the Harbormaster. I felt like you captured his spirit in this poem with the language and descriptions you chose. You steered away from the flowery and rested in the more angular language. I particularly enjoyed your descriptions of the trees in part one.
This is probably one of my favorite poems of yours I've read, Tom. Great work.
Posted 5 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
E,
Much appreciate this review. Jame's book was called Washington Square . . . sorry for corr.. read moreE,
Much appreciate this review. Jame's book was called Washington Square . . . sorry for correcting you . . . that's not nice on my part. Especially after praising this piece so . . . Spent a number of mid-days in this park in upstate NY. It is a very pleasant park to visit. Glad the tree intro pleased you . . . it was nice that the trees were marked with their names . . . made writing this poem easier. Yet I'm amazed at the variety of trees in the South . . . ones you'd never see up in the north. All the best . . . may you and your family have a happy thanksgiving.
T
4 Years Ago
I don’t mind being corrected, Tom, haha. I’m pretty good at making mistakes. Thanks for pointing.. read moreI don’t mind being corrected, Tom, haha. I’m pretty good at making mistakes. Thanks for pointing that out. I hope you and your family have a wonderful holiday as well. Best.
Oh wow...this is so cool. I read this guy a bit back and was amazed by his style. This is a fitting tribute to the style with plenty of you flowing through it. You know I love these slices of life, the reality, the remembrance, the vitality. This was just what I needed this afternoon. wonderful stuff.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
C,
Glad it helped make your day my friend! I think Ohara's poetry was spotty . . . just read.. read moreC,
Glad it helped make your day my friend! I think Ohara's poetry was spotty . . . just read his "Lunch Poems" from City Lights Books.
T
Started reading and writing poetry while in the Army many years ago. I picked up a book of poems by Leonard Cohen in a bookshop on Monterrey CA's Fisherman's Wharf and went on from there. I've had a n.. more..