easy homicide; hope .

hope is easy killed .

Author's Note

critiques ?

Reviews

[Jason]

This is wonderful. A great work of art, that flows beautifully from the beginning to the end. Your use of metaphors is one that leaves the reader in awe, and with a wonderful picture to associate with the story that the writers was intending to create. "I'm hopeful today, FRAGILE, eggshell feeling...."...., this is truly a great work of art, and I want to thank you for sharing...:)

[Dante Harper]

Theres an interesting take on hope. And its all so true. Beautifully written.

[Sel Whiteley]

Brilliant layout with some great images.

[Butterflymom]

This is so beautiful, and well done. It was so creative, and the imagery was lovely. The font made it more fun and enjoyable to read!

[Tanya]

Wow. I love the whole structure of the poem. Simple but totally meaningful. I love the short and simple imagery in you poem.
Good Job.