Inadequacy

This is new

This feelng

This sadness

This ovewhelming feeling of failure

of hurt

of pain

of agony

of things not said

a bad grade

A missed appointment

Some things forgotten

Something done wrong

Someting we cannot fix

PEOPLE'S F*****G EXPECTATIONS!!

It wont stop

It keeps coming

Faster, bigger, stronger

Its defenses sway

but then it come straight at us 

With another attack

With another problem

A problem that adds to problems

with no solutions

It leaves us waiting, wanting, craving

and awakening

a rescue

 

Reviews

[A Spectacular Case]

Well written, i like this, the vocabulary's carefully picked, nice one.