A woman reborn

A woman reborn

 Living off the high of you,

A melody that plays over and over on my mind.

Memories overlapping fantasies, because what is real

Seems surreal…

Linking hearts and minds, passions and dreams,

I want to swim in your pool of serene,

And bathe in your essence of masculinity

And feel refreshed, ready to be reborn

Into this new woman,

One who had been locked in chains for so long…

Can we create a new song,

Where I can sing

And you can let your fingers press

Against and produce the beat…

Inside my heart.

You are the creator of my soul

And I am the singer of the song

That we produce,

One that we have been anticipating for too long…

Floating off the keys of love,

No discordance to this union

For once I have someone who understands

The music that flows in me,

Who perfects my every melody,

Whose skilled hands caress every inch of

My imperfections…

I love him for he is the creator of my soul,

And he makes me whole….

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[Antonio Valentino]

Linking hearts and minds, passions and dreams,

I want to swim in your pool of serene,

And bathe in your essence of masculinity

And feel refreshed, ready to be reborn

Into this new woman,

One who had been locked in chains for so long…

Can we create a new song,

Where I can sing

And you can let your fingers press

Against and produce the beat…

Inside my heart.

You are the creator of my soul

And I am the singer of the song

That we produce,

One that we have been anticipating for too long…

Floating off the keys of love,

No discordance to this union

For once I have someone who understands

The music that flows in me,

Who perfects my every melody,

Whose skilled hands caress every inch of

My imperfections…

I love him for he is the creator of my soul,

And he makes me whole….


Okay, okay, I pretty much copied the whole poem... not that the first four lines weren't great, but right below that it really had me mesmerized... so nice to read you again my friend... this was absolutely beautiful.

Antonio :)

[Ivory]

I want to swim in your pool of serene,
And bathe in your essence of masculinity...

I love those lines!!! Such a passionate tribute to love and how it can make you feel reborn... I can truely relate, I really love this piece... : )

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are the creator of my soul
And I am the singer of the song
That we produce,

It seems like forever since i saw a new poem from you but you certainly have not lost your touch... this ballad of love is melodically romantic.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Why is it that singers always fall for their producers? and vice versa? lol