When it's Near

Love in an inch of a distance.

I can talk, I can speak.

I can approach you, I’m not weak.

But whenever I try, I just hold.

When you’re near to me, I’m loss for words.

 

I am neat, I am clean.

I've got hygiene, which is seen.

But when you come close, I just rattle.

I then bath in cologne, the whole bottle.

 

I am brave, I don’t fear.

Even scared, I don’t tear.

But when you came long, I just wiggle.

You melt my knees, and make my heart giggle.

 

When you’re near to me, I turn into something.

I may not do it, but its happening.

So that’s how it is, that’s how it feels.

That’s how love, when it’s actually near.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I dedicate this Poem to a girl whom I felt this kind of LOVE :) Junellie "INTSIK" Domingo Enjoy guys! comments and reviews are again so welcome!

Reviews

[I AM]

Nice poem. I can imagine how would you act in front of the girl: like a shampoo commercial! :)
You choose the right word for the right rhyme, and you don't lose the message of the poem. I really like to read this kind of poem. You deliver strong message. You make good rhyming. This is beautiful.
Did you tell the girl about this poem? I bet she'll like it a lot.

[Ken]

Hahaha! Thank you so much for your kind words :) I've already told her, she just smiled. That's already a good result for me :)


-KEN

[misha]

Aw, this is such a sweet and innocent piece. I enjoyed reading it!

[Ken]

Thank you so much for appreciating :) I'll try making up more.

-KEN

[misha]

You are welcome :-)