No Off Switch

wringing out my sadness
into this notebook I pour, emptiness
bailing out a boat
with no land in sight
drinking from a dry well
thirsty for hope
even to love, yourself, impossible
when days pass, without dawning
silence, becomes music
a song without words on the radio
turn it off

Author's Note

Please point out any and all errors and feel free to tell me you hate it. Just please please please leave a review. Thank you so much for your time.

Reviews

[Rachel U.]

Your imagery is a little typical, but still intense.
//a song without words on the radio
turn it off//
These lines are particularly good. :)
Remember not to confuse your articles: "An dry well" should be "A dry well." You're a little heavy on the commas, but that is excusable using poetic license.
Excellent work.

[Katie L]

love it, i think your a great writer

[Hippy]

i like this peice full of emotion though it should be a dry well not an, and instead of all the commmas try just droping to the next line and if your trying to show a pause which i feel you were in the line "even to love, yourself, impossible" but still its a great peice just a little touching up and this would really shine keep up the good work

[Alana]

again i really like this poem. :] i can't wait to read more of you're poems. i can feel the emotion you want to portray very well