precious

precious

A Poem by world war jessica <3
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if you can guess what its about ill be mad impressed

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imagine
you could have any one thing in the world
now imagine you have it.
how terrifying it must be
 

to hold what you want most in your hands.
to hold it tightly in some hopes that you may never lose it.
to have it slip between your fingers.
 

to pick it up again.
not the same rare gift.
tainted.
still precious.
 

what pain you must hold in those palms

© 2009 world war jessica <3


Author's Note

world war jessica &lt;3
mer mer you ask ill tell

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This is interesting, can't guess what it is about...but I would think it might be love? I don't know, I am too morbid to think of 'positive' gifts received.

I liked the flow, it is metered well. Overall an interesting read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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world war jessica &lt;3
world war jessica <3

raceland, KY



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i write mostly short poetry. it will be choppy. i doubt ill be doing much in line of editing. my writing is 99% about life experiences. some of it might be hard to understand. =] but if you want.. more..

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