advise

yeah this was part of a conversation i had with my dear caitlyn conley. my sarcastic humor knows no bounds i think. its not a very serious poem, just a very short one. enjoy

you told me you love him

and maybe you do

I wouldn't know about love anyways

I never got past raw heat

it never hit me after waking

after tangles of sheets and limbs

after power and lust

kisses never struck me sweetly

touches never tender

so i think tender is something best enjoyed after

after you've fallen head over feet

and head over feet never happened for me

except for once

in the backseat of a mustang

which i dont think counts

Author's Note

dont badger me about grammer, blah blah blah... its ok to say my writing sucked but dont tell me i didn't use caps on my i or periods or what ever else i neglected. lol. u get the idea

Reviews

[Baby Boy]

You are fine gurl! I amnot worried about your grammer or spelling as long as what you are writing is coming from your heart. I actually liked this peice and I like the boldness and the truthfullness you put into this! Great write gurl! I'mma have to read more now cause you seem interesting! LOL! One luv Miss Jessica! Holla at ya boy!


-JC-