White Deception

I'll never commit...

"Until Death do us part…"

The words left their lips in whispering adoration,

Weaving man and woman together in a supernal bond,

Forever was just a start.

 

Love reigned, passions flowed, happiness bloomed,

All was right and Forever never ceased to exist.

 

But Forever was not to last,

As Time pricked and prodded at human desires,

Once trustful man and woman now trapped in dubiety,

Soon Death met Forever.

 

Hate screamed, apathy seeped, sadness withered,

All was wrong and the End was creeping closer.

 

At last they parted but sought again,

The bliss of union that once cradled their souls,

All this they found once more in the years of Future,

 

Another White Deception.

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

White deception is only for the non-believer, the non-participant in the marriage, the non-working half in what is the rule of two. One will not a marriage make. Even the straightest of straight edges will have the occasional imperfection and so will there never be the perfect marriage. Ah, but, two people working toward a common goal; now there is a chance that I'll bet on.

[Kels-Ace]

You're spot on, Perkele. Thanks for taking the time to offer feedback, it's much appreciated.

[Karen Arizona]

White Deception-A Poem by Kels-Ace is well written and creative. Love lives, dies, and returns even stronger for what it has learned. Your poem is a good lesson and I'm glad I came to class today. Thank you for sharing.

[Kels-Ace]

Thank you for your kind words, Karen. It's nice to see someone taking the time to interpret and appreciate poetry.