Is this wrong?

It's funny how this worked out,

I met you,

You smiled and said hello,

Your best friend was once mine,

Then he walked away,

Surprise,

Surprise,

You were there when no one else was,

To listen to my every word,

Even when it was late at night,

You gave me comfort,

I can't help it,

I think I have fallen once again,

Is this wrong?

Should I be ashamed of how I feel?

I’m scared if I follow through,

And kiss you,

I will ruin something worth living for,

You say I won’t,

And that you don’t care what everyone else thinks,

I hope that my decision won’t come around again,

And backstab me.

 

Author's Note

just a poem now...dosnt mean muchhh. what do you think?

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Tender, poignant concern. Like a young deer learning to walk -- that being, in your young human instance, dealing with feelings, attachments, politics of teen friendships.

Of course you honor and treasure all miraculous moments of intimacy.

It being early for the rigors of philosophical juxtapositions, I recommend attention to breathing. It's the simplest way to arrive at a timeless spiritual clearing in the midst of the transience of temporal emotions.

This poem seems inseparable from you. I am touched by your passage through time. For life's inevitable storms of feelings, the Eye of these storms is calm acceptance of change, deep breathing, attention without complication.

Blessings.

[Crazy Cat Man]

Awww awww.......memories from my teenage days......well the only thing i have to say is......everyone is a backstabber in the teenage phase..... no responsibilities. everyone is a liar.....so you shouldn't let if phase you. great piece though

[Joseph - Michael]

It should mean something, because you wrote it...

Anyway, it's so true how the decisions we all have to make and scarifice, one way or another...

So, it's all good tho...

[Juanita]

Good job on this piece. That's a hard decision to make & you put it into words very well.

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Wow!!
This is amazing!
I know these feelings u express & u express them very well.
Very well writen!!

[Brandon]

I think it was well done. Nice Job.

[An owl on the moon]

There are so many levels I read into this one! There is the love that we all seek, being cherished and wanted by someone. You also very clearly bring in the complexity of love, falling for someone who is the best friend of a former love. Beautiful and deep!

[Christina]

i know how this feels...just be careful and don't let yourself fall too fast.
i liked the poem though.

[Jessica L Auster]

I would have to say take a chance with him, you only live once. I liked your poem. It brought out your emotions well.

[justjenn_2u]

A chance you have to take or not take. Just remember, friends are forever (that is real friends). Maybe better to be friends until you are sure. The beginning of any relationship is always full of overwhelming feelings, sometimes the best decision aren't made. The poem is full of questions, well written.