I was wrong.

 

It took me a while,

To open my heart,

And when I did,

I felt so happy,

I thought I had found someone who actually cared,

He treated me special,

Like I was one of kind,

But out of nowhere,

 He started to treat me like dirt,

One mean word led to another,

And already I was getting hurt,

You say that you’re just kidding,

But no girl,

Should have to put up with those cruel words,

I have seen this before,

And it never turns out pretty,

I thought you were different,

But of course I had to be wrong,

He’d rather have his tongue down my throat,

Then get to know me,

Soon enough,

I was able to see right through the fog,

No longer will you put me down,

And no longer will I have this frown.

This is where I say...

I have had enough!!!

 

Author's Note

all guys are the same. surprise surprise.

Reviews

[extreme booger producti..]

you can't really say that all guys are the same since you haven't met every guy on earth. just because a few treat you like s**t doesn't mean they all will.

an okay poem. the exclamation points at the end are unnecessary, imo.

[justjenn_2u]

More power to you - getting your fill of a user! Sounds like the beginning of emotional abuse. This never gets better. I wish you love!

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I know what you mean.
My last boyfriend was a jerk,
actually he was worst.
Love the poem.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

I agree!!
Amazing girlie. (:

[Travis Lawrence]

Hang in there, and listen to John, he's exactly right. That's my advice, anyway. And it's good to see that you stood up for yourself, don't let anyone treat you like dirt!

-Travis

[John Stussy]

Well... not all guys. But there are some bad ones. I hope that your luck with them improves. For now, i suggest that you take a bit of a reprieve from us dickheads with penises lol. Take time to live life for you, have fun and enjoy being a free single. Hang out with friends, strengthen the bonds you have with them rather than looking for a good guy. There is time for guys later. Give them some time to mature themselves.

[mandy]

Hi Kelsiee
It's good that you are learning now. Your writings remind me of my earlier ones. Keep it up. Oh and p.s. not all guys are the same. I have learned that men, as with anything, fall into categories,and the only things that remain the same if we let them, are our choices and reflections of ourselves.