prone

something i wrote thats been on a sticky note on my laptop for awhile

she was the ticking time bomb

the most destructive part of her lurked inside her

head

and everyone around her was just waiting

for her to 

explode

Reviews

[jeannemarie coulter]

each human imagination exploding to lead others

[E.L. Debbage]

I love this! You've inspired me to actually start writing little short poems, as i'm always thinking of them but not jotting them down, then forgetting. Small things can have an equally large impact, cheers for helping me remember that
- ellen x

[Kelsey Rogers]

This makes me so happy! I was never one for poetry until my mind started wandering in class. If it helps I write everything down in sentence form and then break it up into stanzas wherever I see fit when I post them on here. Send me a RR! I would love to read your short poems

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Good to see the highlights of explode most of the people are really like that....

[Kelsey Rogers]

very very true. more people than you think.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes absolutely right.

[Cly Young]

Very good. Simple, interesting and dramatic

[Kelsey Rogers]

thank you so much!

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nicely done... love the bold/italicized 'explode' at the end, nicely emphasized :D

many of us are like this.... we let it build up until there is only one way out...

[Kelsey Rogers]

thank you for all of the amazing reviews! i sense a friendship coming

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my pleasure... as do I :D