Hide & Seek

Hide & Seek

Exhale yesterday's feelings

As if it hadn't happened

Live your life knowing

Look into that face

So shattered to pieces

The bits scattered

Hurting heart of blue,

Darkened reddening rage

Foolish innocence glistens

That face so familiar -

Haunting and taunting

Ride that wagon of shame

For karma will keep you,

Seek you in this sick game

For nobody can hide forever

The world's your seeker,

For sought you will be.

Reviews

[Pixie Meat]

Love this, love this, love this.
The imagery is so crisp and clear, almost as if I'm looking at a montage that's telling me to enjoy my life. Love how you used the colours to add that extra edge of visualization to your ideas. One tiny mistake I found was in the last line- past tense of seek is sought, not seeked. Over all a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed it and liked the message a lot.