Chance

I want you to understand that behind my mask,

My heart hurts more than the surface shows.

Each beat pulses more and more pain through my body.

Each second is longer than the outside world knows.

 

I want you to see that beside the truth.

Lies are the other thing that people talk about.

Rumors push me to the ground, hard and cold.

And the pain in my heart, stops the breaths from coming out.

 

And maybe you can help me,

But maybe you can't.

Either way you shoulnd't try.

Never give me a chance. 

Reviews

[sadjgrey]

this is very good,was this just a poem or from personal experience?

[deeps]

You are very poetic
I like your flow with words
I like this i can feel the emotion in it.