All it Took

We are connected in ways 

Only we can pinpoint 

You give my life a reason to continue 

Family since day one 

My hero before you looked deep into my eyes 

All it took 

Was the taking of your hand 

You reached inside 

And took my heart 

I have always watched from a far 

Waiting for that one day 

That you will forever change my life 

For you its the simplest of ways 

But for me you changed my world..

You soon became my rock, 

All it takes is one look into your eyes 

And i am forever connected 

For its you i reach 

Love, oh so deeply 

Your beauty of your soul 

Consumes me, 

It inspires me

You took a chance on me 

And for my words show that i will not leave 

Forever grateful for you 

It took nothing but a hug 

For you consume yourself 

For you to let me in 

Allowing me too see the rainbow of your love 

You call me your angel.. 

But you are forever mine 

Author's Note

Most of you know how connected my life is to my aunt Tarry Franck...

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Tarry is one lucky aunt to have such a special niece...well written tribute....

[Coyote Poetry]

A lucky person will be part of many people lives. I like the poem. A good life is having many friends and knowing love. I like the reason and purpose for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Laura Harrison]

Very heart-felt and beautiful. It's always nice to know that somebody loves you and is there for you :)

[Lover Of Words]

Yes it is thank you

[David Burke]

This is very touching, it's got a nice gentle flow and a very soft and loving tone to it. wonderful job kido

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you kindly

[David Burke]

You're welcome lol :)

[Chris]

You showed your heart... well.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you much

[Cryingkate]

Uh OH this is "All it took" to then "Needed a hand" to be "Given a life"

[Lover Of Words]

LOL whats ur point?

[Cryingkate]

Hell if I know? I thought things were getting confusing talking from 3 different poems then after not realizing I;m talking to two different people I thought how strange that 3 of your poems were are talking from makes a good sentence

[Lover Of Words]

We are talking on 3 of my poems lol...

[Anand Sehgal]

I have always watched from a far
Waiting for that one day
That you will forever change my life
For you its the simplest of ways

realistic , emotive lines. Each one of us crave for a picture-perfect partner !

[Cryingkate]

Well >>>> Don't hold your breath !
It's your life ! You are the only one that can change it.read moreWell >>>> Don't hold your breath !
It's your life ! You are the only one that can change it.
But you know it starts from the inside out.
I know you know that.:-)

[Anand Sehgal]

:) sure. I will look forward to read more from you.

[Cryingkate]

No I didn't write read more.. LOL this site cut my paragraph off LOL. It's been doing that all day;-)
I have been having some private fun watching the reply s I get from only half what I really wrote.
Would make for a fun story wouldn't it?

[Anand Sehgal]

Yes. I read you full comment, but wanted to crack a joke with you :) hope you didn't mind :P

[Cryingkate]

LMAO YOU GOT ME ! But I got ya back I bet letting you in on it happened all day that way LOL

[Cryingkate]

You Know we should take to the email thingy here cause we are hogging up the screen for other reviews and postings. We should use this for just reviews...I bet you were thinking same thing too?

[Anand Sehgal]

yepp. I do :)

[Cryingkate]

Hey what You are not Kelsey LOL... You snuck in somewhere. LOL ... Well Hello !

[Anand Sehgal]

Oh my god ..! comedy of errors

[Lover Of Words]

you didnt know i wasnt talking lol

[Anand Sehgal]

sorry friends :/

[Cryingkate]

Hell No I thought it strange you changed your photo though in the middle of talking...

Pleased to meet you W_H no problem here I'll just see a Dr, in the morning
and get me one of those white coats and no sleeves