All I Can See

All i can see 

All i can see is your heart 

I can feel  your soul 

Show me your beauty 

And i will show you the light 

Of the courage that you carry 

All i can see is your eyes 

Let me reach inside 

I can show you what others can not see 

You are all I can see 

Your something 

I am grateful to love 

I see the moon 

I see the stars 

I want to ride your smile 

I want to dance with your heart 

i want to sing with your voice 

I want to fly with your arms 

All i can see

Is what the magic is that you bring 

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I could feel magic in this piece...beautifully written...

[Cryingkate]

This is neat, What in what of " All you can see" sounds like it's saying it sees little" Yet It is Everything !

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[The Seasonal Girl]

What a beauty...It's hard to pick out one line that I loved most.. the flow of the poem revealed the beauty of true love.. It's amazing.. The perfect poem to begun my day with :)

[Lover Of Words]

Wow thank you

[David Burke]

I liked this one, you did very good kido :P keep up the good work

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you ryan

[David Burke]

you're welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

"I am grateful to love
I see the moon
I see the stars
I want to ride your smile "
A beautiful poem for love. I like the above lines a lot. A very nice ending for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Anand Sehgal]

I can feel your soul
Show me your beauty
And i will show you the light
Of the courage that you carry

noblest of the thoughts around. great :)

[Sami Khalil]

A magical write indeed that touches all the senses and especially the eyes...Bravo...............

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you sir

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure ma'm...:)..................