Captured

Captured 

Sitting in anguish 

After you aggressive tones 

Coaxed into your mean world you so desperately strive from 

Boxed into the fear 

Dehumanized like nothing matters 

You captured me degraded my soul 

Confined to the safety of others 

Left in the gloomy of fear 

Heartbroken by your hatred 

Kept away from the world 

Falling in the loveless mind 

In a world of panic 

Captured, misunderstood 

Captured in your world 

Author's Note

Just a writing that popped into my head

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

This one seems a little bit more dark, and I feel some true anger, in it, frustration, at least, let it all out, there is always light after these feelings my darlin. You are just to bright to be so sad...
Anyhow, you did captured me with this one, well done!

- Elisa

[Lover Of Words]

Happiness then i hit the very bottom of rock bottom... This is just the after effects of it... Yes my writing can be somewhat dark... At different stages of emotions... Thanks for reading my dear

Never change! :) you're beautiful in all ways little one. Always my pleasure. xx

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much my dear :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork and the story in the poem. Your strong description create visions of imprisonment and loss of freedom.
"Left in the gloomy of fear
Heartbroken by your hatred "
No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Sounds so tragic ... good writing Kelsey! :-)

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you so much

[David Scott]

We must allow this capture... Yet once we have conceded the trap can be hard to unset.
Not sure about the mature rating.
Interesting and yes, a little dark.

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks... it is a litle dark... maybe not dark enough for the mature rating?