within My Heart

Within my heart you will always be 

You are an inspiration

Everyday I realized 

How much more important you have become 

Life without you i could not see within my heart 

You have given me something of hope 

Though you may not see 

What it is you have done for me 

How else do i confess 

My trust within you 

Your beauty is as bright as the sun 

Within my heart 

Within my soul 

With my love i do not hide 

The fact that you are my sunshine 

You have been in my vision for years 

In hopes to honor you 

You give a present of wisdom 

Day by day you become more and more special to me  

Day or night 

I will stand by you 

forever you will be 

Within my heart 

Reviews

[TPK Stories]

powerful tribute...well done...

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[Alexis]

How wonderful this is, to read your work.

I think that this poem really showed how you felt - in terms of love.

There are people who will agree with your work, but there are others who will disagree with your work. This is because expressing love is just an opinion of the mind. Love does not have a true definition, because each person has their own opinion about love.

But I love how you expressed your feelings so well. Great work! And please, don't hesitate to send me a reading request. (:

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks again my friend.... :)

[Jack...]

Kelsey, love can be such a beautiful thing and you have expressed it well in your poem today. To feel that "one" alive in your heart is a wonderful feeling indeed.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you so much jack

[Baban.A.A]

it is a true and vivd expression of love, the good side of, which is rare nowadays of course. things are not as yesterday, because yesterday was just a day as today, and tommorow today will be yesterday...so that is life, coarse,visious,and barbarous, lovely, mother-like being.....but here is a question if life does contain love, would be more lovly, more relaxing, more joyful....I do believe not.... love is a way to kill the joy because it cut all the ways to a real life, in other words, it is just fantasy, or unreal, reality is quite different, reality does not allow a temperorly love, and if you allow it you ruin your yesterday,today, and tommorow, and life is just a couple of yesterdays, todays, and tommorrows, so it means it ruins life....I kind of wanted this to be in verse, which means rhythmatic, but free style is ok. the words were good, but yet there were other hopeful words to be used, all in all best luck, it was a nice piece of writing, but not any writing is perfect, and our job is to get near it, hope you try to get near it, thanks.

[Antoñyo]

A really nice expression of true love, respect and even friendship within this piece.
A joy to read.

Thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem for love. Love need trust and two people with the same desire and dream of happiness. I like the description and the emotion of love alive and well in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[Tarry Franck]

What a delightful piece of work - Bravo

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much dear