I think that this poem really showed how you felt - in terms of love.
There are people who will agree with your work, but there are others who will disagree with your work. This is because expressing love is just an opinion of the mind. Love does not have a true definition, because each person has their own opinion about love.
But I love how you expressed your feelings so well. Great work! And please, don't hesitate to send me a reading request. (:
Kelsey, love can be such a beautiful thing and you have expressed it well in your poem today. To feel that "one" alive in your heart is a wonderful feeling indeed.
it is a true and vivd expression of love, the good side of, which is rare nowadays of course. things are not as yesterday, because yesterday was just a day as today, and tommorow today will be yesterday...so that is life, coarse,visious,and barbarous, lovely, mother-like being.....but here is a question if life does contain love, would be more lovly, more relaxing, more joyful....I do believe not.... love is a way to kill the joy because it cut all the ways to a real life, in other words, it is just fantasy, or unreal, reality is quite different, reality does not allow a temperorly love, and if you allow it you ruin your yesterday,today, and tommorow, and life is just a couple of yesterdays, todays, and tommorrows, so it means it ruins life....I kind of wanted this to be in verse, which means rhythmatic, but free style is ok. the words were good, but yet there were other hopeful words to be used, all in all best luck, it was a nice piece of writing, but not any writing is perfect, and our job is to get near it, hope you try to get near it, thanks.
A beautiful and hopeful poem for love. Love need trust and two people with the same desire and dream of happiness. I like the description and the emotion of love alive and well in the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Hi My name is Kelsey, I have a mild form of Cerbral Palsey and i did not choose to be given this but i live with it proudly I love sports sense i cant play them i like to watch them.. I do not judge .. more..