within My Heart

within My Heart

A Poem by Lover Of Words

Within my heart you will always be 
You are an inspiration
Everyday I realized 
How much more important you have become 
Life without you i could not see within my heart 
You have given me something of hope 
Though you may not see 
What it is you have done for me 
How else do i confess 
My trust within you 
Your beauty is as bright as the sun 
Within my heart 
Within my soul 
With my love i do not hide 
The fact that you are my sunshine 
You have been in my vision for years 
In hopes to honor you 
You give a present of wisdom 
Day by day you become more and more special to me  
Day or night 
I will stand by you 
forever you will be 
Within my heart 

© 2013 Lover Of Words


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powerful tribute...well done...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much
How wonderful this is, to read your work.

I think that this poem really showed how you felt - in terms of love.

There are people who will agree with your work, but there are others who will disagree with your work. This is because expressing love is just an opinion of the mind. Love does not have a true definition, because each person has their own opinion about love.

But I love how you expressed your feelings so well. Great work! And please, don't hesitate to send me a reading request. (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Thanks again my friend.... :)
Kelsey, love can be such a beautiful thing and you have expressed it well in your poem today. To feel that "one" alive in your heart is a wonderful feeling indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much jack
it is a true and vivd expression of love, the good side of, which is rare nowadays of course. things are not as yesterday, because yesterday was just a day as today, and tommorow today will be yesterday...so that is life, coarse,visious,and barbarous, lovely, mother-like being.....but here is a question if life does contain love, would be more lovly, more relaxing, more joyful....I do believe not.... love is a way to kill the joy because it cut all the ways to a real life, in other words, it is just fantasy, or unreal, reality is quite different, reality does not allow a temperorly love, and if you allow it you ruin your yesterday,today, and tommorow, and life is just a couple of yesterdays, todays, and tommorrows, so it means it ruins life....I kind of wanted this to be in verse, which means rhythmatic, but free style is ok. the words were good, but yet there were other hopeful words to be used, all in all best luck, it was a nice piece of writing, but not any writing is perfect, and our job is to get near it, hope you try to get near it, thanks.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A really nice expression of true love, respect and even friendship within this piece.
A joy to read.

Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful and hopeful poem for love. Love need trust and two people with the same desire and dream of happiness. I like the description and the emotion of love alive and well in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
What a delightful piece of work - Bravo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear

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Hi My name is Kelsey, I have a mild form of Cerbral Palsey and i did not choose to be given this but i live with it proudly I love sports sense i cant play them i like to watch them.. I do not judge .. more..

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