Loss of Grip

Losing my gasp of life 

For what do i have to give 

I have become invisable 

Oh how it hurts 

The pain that these tears bring 

Climbling a mountian alone is one tough huddle 

The unsettling feeling 

Always in a bad place in my mind

The feeling of being watched 

Losing the grasp of myself 

My purpose 

Losing the grasp of others love 

Digging around for the answer 

To my down fall 

But yet i cant not find it 

Losing the grasp of life 

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

i felt the loss here...i know what it feels like when it seems like we don't have a grasp on our life...great write...

[Lobster Goldberg]

I know this feeling all too well. You wrote a very wonderful emotional poem.

[Lover Of Words]

You're never invisible my friend, at least not for me, I'm always around, to read and support....sometimes it feels as if we are all alone, but we aren't. To let in the love is an art too. You capture that in this wonderous little poem for me... :) keep your head up, and try to feel less sad (saying this also to myself lol).... wonderful write my dear.

- Elisa

[Lover Of Words]

Doing my best to feel less sad... Thanks for stopping by lovely one

I know the feeling .... we should face sadness, but find balance in sadness, and turn it to beauty. :) Always my pleasure, and coming soon by for more, have to catch up on so many! xx

[Lover Of Words]

I appreciate you lovely

[luviva]

ohh reach out yeah dear friend....
Reach out n grasp yo life back...
Before it floats out ov reach!
Start with yourz n then star worying about other's love
L,...

[Jack...]

Sadness and heartbreak can have this affect on us. Nicely penned Kelsey

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and powerful poem. Easy to feel invisible. The poem described struggle and the desire to find peace and balance. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Anand Sehgal]

phases like this come and go. stay firm on your ground :) good write :)

[Alexis]

I just love it, and I love how you wrote it. I don't know what else to say but that I can relate to that, every piece.. beautiful writing