Elisa Laura- Lovely One

Oh the words 

To say thank you 

for whom you have been 

Your beauty is seen within your words 

On the other side of the world I may sit 

But there is something about who you are 

Makes me feel as though i am right there next to you 

Such a great friend to have 

Have been blessed 

With your presents 

You are full of joy 

My lovely one 

A trust worthy one 

For whom has found her place 

Within my life 

Though her magical words

Her strong ability to shine 

I can say 

Whom watches form many oceans 

I am blessed 

for the lovely one 

She became within a blink of an eye 

Oh lovely one 

Your beauty shines 

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a beautiful ode to our Eli! So gorgeous, Kelsey...just like our Sea Maiden...
She shines like the stars in the night...
Her love and friendship has touched many, and I see she has touched your heart as well.. Such a blessing..
Well expressed tribute!~xoxo~ lovely!

[Lover Of Words]

She has touched my heart in many ways thank you :)

Sniff Sis, now you, I'm tears all over this eve LOL... I need a bottle of red wine... lol love you guys! ♥

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is wonderful... you wrote a heartfelt piece. :)

[Lover Of Words]

All for the beauty that Elisa truly deserves! :) thanks again

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Drink and enjoy, Sis... you deserve so much more... (((hugs)))~xoxoxoxo~

I won't touch any, (I can't have it with my health). But I think I sip on a good red wine :) that's pleasure too! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

as long as you are taking good care of yourself, Sis... you do what makes you happy...
I have you're back 200%... I'll drink grape juice in a wine glass if that helps. lol ;D

Ha!!!! yep, how do you know? I just drink a tomato juice, so healthy, withouth the vodka ;) but with some sellery ha!!! :D it helps ha!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh I love Bloody Marys... but especially spicy ones.. we call that a Bloody bull! and I'm a Taurus! ;P
Yes I was a bartender once. lol

I know you're Sis, LOL it's your Spanish blood-line, and mine too, I can go well with them, but also it can be too hot!!! haha, (I truly hope) we never get a Sis fight though, LOL ;) Crazy, oh that's a lovely name!!!! I put "Tabasco" in it :D my fav.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Spicy! yes indeed! ;D

[Eric Pudalov]

Kelsey - this is such an incredibly sweet, touching tribute to Elisa. I really love all your poems, but especially the pieces you have written for other authors here on WC - it's wonderful to see how they've touched your heart, even if you haven't met in person!

It's hard to say what it is, but certain people here on the Cafe have that ability to reach beyond the boundaries of physical space and time, and it feels as though they're right here next to you. Ellie is one of those people. As you said, "Your beauty is seen within your words," and she definitely does watch "from many oceans," as you said here.

I feel that *you* are one of those people as well, whether or not you realize it! You have touched my heart many times with your words. Great work, and well penned!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Excellent tribute! That's all I can say.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you Kenneth

♥ You bud! thanks for all you always do for/to me! I won't forget ....

[Lover Of Words]

Sniff, what can I say Kels? you bring tears to this emotional wreck at the time LOL... really, wow.
Such a sweet poem for me... I know we have been both through many health issues, and we keep on fighting always. I know your heart, and soul, I know you're shining always, and not ever complain, for you're such a strong person! You're a true friend, and an ever sweet soul. :) I can't thank you enough for doing this for me..... much love!

- Elisa

[Lover Of Words]

No need to thank me lovely one... It just comes with whom you are in my eyes!!! But i am glad you like it :)

I don't like it, I LOVE IT!!!! :) I feel so blessed with you little one! you're a shining light upon my darker times.... x

[Lover Of Words]

I am the blessed one lovely one... As i will be around always to lead you out of your darker days :)

I'm there for you either!!! I promise. You're like family to me!

[Lover Of Words]

As you are to me a missing piece

Distance doesn't means a thing, within two travelers minds ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Distance doesnt matter in my heart of hearts :)... Your to amazing to forget no matter where you are

I think often to leave this place forever, Kels, I'm so tired, you know.... but you guys are keeping me in the roll :D I can't thank you enough for it sweety! you brought a smile on me back again since long...

[Lover Of Words]

Stay strong my dear friend, you are so loved, it is my pleasure to share my kindness with a lovely one as your self... When you are down and cant get back up please think of me, i may be far but know that my admiration for you is as huge as the world.

And that all, while I'm just a normal person, not perfect at all, really. I suck on many things. I"m dull sometimes, and goofy. Spontaneous, and it can work out right, or totally bad... ha! you both crack me up here, love to both, Kels, you're sweet, Robbie you're the one I meet soon! and we make that trip to Greece!

[Lover Of Words]

No matter how you see yourself your still amazing :)