Evil Shadow

Casting an evil touch on my skin 

The glowing eyes 

Felt watching over me 

A chilling spell cast 

The cuts return to my body 

Bloody and raw 

Deep and ridged 

Cries of fright 

Says my shaking body 

Behind the closed door

The evil shadow emerges

Lifting my soul out of my sleeping body 

The eyes of the evil cast 

Grow wider and wider 

Casting a suicidal spell

Leaving it unknown 

Will my mind find the light 

Away from this evil shadow 

Under minding the spell

Unleashing these fearful dreams 

Saving my body from harm 

This evil shadow 

Casting a evil spell

Upon my life 

I stand in a corner 

In sheer fright  

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

Scary stuff Kelsey.....Brrrrrr.

Great read though

I wondered about CAST and CASTING being so close in the text and I also wondered if you meant to write Under minding instead of undermining......

[Plume de flamme]

You tell a real-life nightmare. A very effective and emotional write.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[David Scott]

Reminds me a little of "the Dark Passenger" in the Dexter series, only self inflicting rather than outwardly focused...
You give the reader a real sense of the fright felt.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you David

[The Nude Writer]

Powerful poem.. very well written

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much dear

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Wow! Kelsey! That sent shivers down my spine! Extremely chilling! Excellent!

[Antoñyo]

Not a fan of evil, I have to say this was written extremely vivid, darkly effective and equally chilling.
Thanks for the share.

[Nick.B]

Very dark and deeply created...great job

[Silent Wolf]

The title caught my eye, so I read it. I rarely read poetry, and this was very good. Thank you for sharing.

[Lover Of Words]

Well i thank you for stopping by.

[Jack...]

Very deep and dark Kelsey. Nicely done.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[Baby Ricochet]

Heavy like acid rain. Good job

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much