Kill My Heart

In fear of whats happening 

Realizing that maybe the world would be better without me 

If i went into my angels arms 

Kill my heart 

These tears i cry alone 

Is worse then leaving

They sting 

Lost in the world of death

Is that my answer 

Would it better for all

Or would i even be missed if i called it quits on my life 

Kill my heart 

Stab me 

Shoot me 

All would be better 

Then the pain i am living in 

If i kill my heart 

Would those who love 

Even be sad 

Kill my heart 

My life has its ups and downs 

Waiting for someone to say goodbye too

Kill my heart 

Let my life live on 

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Excellent write to this tragic poem...

[Keith LaFountaine]

Lots of emotion humming beneath the surface of this piece. It's sad that people do feel like this, and I've been through it myself. Excellent work though. Hope all is well with you.

[Lover Of Words]

yes thank you everything is fine.... thank you

[Antoñyo]

Was thinking while reading, 'this is strong and vivid"
...then POW! "Waiting for someone to say goodbye too" smacked me in the face like a jealous lover!
Very sad, sad, writing, and I hate if it were true. Better to hurt than to not feel at all...Pain dies, numbness...well then you're a walking corpse.

...but again, that line is sheer BRILLIANCE!

Thanks for sharing

[Lover Of Words]

Wow this reveiw is awesome!!!!! thank you

[Antoñyo]

Just being honest. You're very welcome ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. To give up and to in to pain. Leave us weak and alone. A lot of struggle in the words. When the heart is dead. Hard to find reason to smile or be alive. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you Coyote

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

"Kill my heart
Let my life live on"

I love how you describe the place where your pain lies.They say your mind controls your body,but and aching heart leaves a confused mind. Great write!

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you so much

[Jack...]

Very sad this poem today, as love shows its bad side. Very well written, the pain is evident.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you so much jack

[Rabbi Tzephanyah Ben Yo..]

This is a sad deep write, The wounds and scars of the past can haunt and the yearning for to be loved is voluminous. Excellent Job.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you sir

[Nick.B]

Love is something we must feel and not think, it's difficult and painful, at the end we ask ourselves if it is all worth it....great job

[Baby Ricochet]

Love is difficult. Good poem

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you baby