Carry Me Within

Carry my heart inside your hands 

Hold my smile within yours 

Make me complete with your laughter 

Hold me closely to your heart at night 

Set my mind free of visions with you in my sight 

Carry me within 

When you leave 

I leave my scent upon you

Making you miss thee 

Minutes 

Hours 

Days 

come to a stop because of your kindness 

Making my skin crawl

Carry me within 

And were apart 

You can feel my heart 

Allow my voice to carry within your dreams 

A new adventure has arose 

Alone you have given my heart something its been missing 

Carry me within 

And you can always find me 

Carry me within 

And ill be waiting 

Too be in your arms again 

Carry me within 

And i will never be far from reach 

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

The ultimate comingling of two souls...let me take you with me where ever I go, so long as you take me with you as well. Then again, two particular lines in this piece, I sense that this has a little darkness hiding beneath the surface...as if the narrator is sentencing a lost lover to carry her with him where ever he goes so that he always knows what he has missed. Not sure if I'm stretching here...just like lines "Making you miss thee" and "Making my sking crawl" give a sense of foreboding in an otherwise upbeat piece. Entertaining read, though.

[Sami Khalil]

"Carry me within
And you can always find me
Carry me within
And ill be waiting
Too be in your arms again "
That is some good poetry...:)

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you sir

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:0

[quinfinn]

alas, to think of someone as the harbinger of all that is spoken, done, met.. is a solace for fantasy...but a sweet one nonetheless. would that we could count on our beloved to see us through all....it is not so. a lovely thought. well penned.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you Quinn